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babydee1

Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 28

Feb 09, 2012 01:08

Hola, peeps! :)

Some more Crisis for ya. A short chapter; hopefully it'll be enough to tide you over until the next is ready (hopefully next week).

Enjoy! :-P

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kitmerlot1213 February 9 2012, 02:11:53 UTC

A beautifully emotional update!

Clark was bound to be angry and upset at what Chloe had done to him. And with both of them now apparently missing…

I like Martha, I always have but at what Chloe had done to him??!! WTF is she smocking? As she forgotten that her dear sweet boy is a rapist? As far as I'm concerned, Chloe could torture Clark for the rest of her life. The only thing that stops me from wishing that is how it would destroy Chloe's soul.

Sorry for the anti-Clark rant but Martha needs a reminder of what her dear little son did to his best friend.

Keep up the excellent work on this fic :):)

babydee1 February 9 2012, 09:11:59 UTC

No worries about the rant, I can see how that sentence might read as insensitive. I thought I'd made it clear that the worry went both ways.

It should actually be something like:

"Clark was bound to be angry and upset at what Chloe had done to him, possibly even to the point of retaliation. And with both of them now apparently missing..."

I'll fix it later on when I can access LJ from something other than a phone!

Thanks as always for your brilliant comments, Kathy. Much appreciated! :)

sweetchiclovesu February 9 2012, 02:57:10 UTC

I'm so happy you updated dee. I feel sorry for both of them now and poor mr and mrs k! I hope things get better soon.

babydee1 June 23 2012, 11:11:47 UTC

Things can only get better from now on, Selene. I guarantee that this is absolute rock-bottom, and the only way left is up. :-)

Glad you liked it!

iluvaqt February 9 2012, 05:01:18 UTC

Oh boy, Papa Bear is going to mad as a hornet. No one is allowed to hurt his son. Quick thinking of Martha and I'm sure she'll manage to get results from somewhere.

I'm glad Clark's waiting her out too. In the desert there's no where to go and nobody to hear or interrupt.

babydee1 June 23 2012, 11:13:46 UTC

"Oh boy, Papa Bear is going to mad as a hornet. No one is allowed to hurt his son. Quick thinking of Martha and I'm sure she'll manage to get results from somewhere."

We hope so...but from where, exactly?!? :-O

"I'm glad Clark's waiting her out too. In the desert there's no where to go and nobody to hear or interrupt."

So hopefully now they can get everything out in the open.

Many thanks for your lovely comments, Kimmy - hope you're well! :-)

madlenita February 9 2012, 07:36:03 UTC

Ok, so now on Chlark front will be questions and answers? And Jonathan will find out what Chloe were doinh... I wondered if change his opinion on Chloe and generally how he will react...

And of course i can't wait for next chapter...

babydee1 June 23 2012, 11:15:20 UTC

I know Jonathan's gonna be angry, but he can't be allowed to forget that his son started this whole sordid mess. :-/

Thanks for your comments, Maddie!

easilyenraged February 9 2012, 09:39:25 UTC

Can't remember if Jonathan knows Clark raped Chloe, I think I would remember if he did find out though, I would imagine he would be quite upset about it more so then Martha.

babydee1 June 23 2012, 11:17:53 UTC

"Can't remember if Jonathan knows Clark raped Chloe,"

Yes, he does. He was the first to know, and it was realising what had happened that spurred him into going to Metropolis to bring Clark back...remember now? Apologies, I know it's been a while since I wrote those chapters!

Glad you're still reading, and liking, and commenting, EE! Much appreciated. :-)