Comments | babydee1: Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 29

babydee1

Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 29

Feb 13, 2012 01:49

Some more Crisis in the house, people! Which means I'm temporarily done with my 5-chapter run, and will show some attention to some of the other stories & series I have on the go. Fingers crossed I can return to this one again soon!

Enjoy.

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chloe, crisis, clark, redkclark, rated:nc17, angst, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, chlark, kal

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phantom_queen February 13 2012, 01:52:14 UTC

So sad. I feel so bad for Chloe and even a little bit bad for Clark.

babydee1 February 13 2012, 08:59:11 UTC

Clark only gets a little bit, aww!!! :)

Gotta give him props for saving Chloe from herself, though. I guess that's what the 'little bit' is for. ;)

Thanks for commenting, sweetie!

kitmerlot1213 February 13 2012, 02:57:07 UTC

This was GORGEOUS!!

Good for Clark for being so brutally honest with Chloe--she needed to hear each and every painful truth and I think it's helped him to come to terms with his actions as well.

And I especially loved the call back to Chloe's deal with Lionel Luthor because the minute she made it, she wanted to take it back.

Truly well done, Dee :)

christina_kat February 13 2012, 04:42:33 UTC

I'm so happy with where this story goes. Great chapter honey.
I truly feel bad for both of them right now.

jacques21 February 13 2012, 05:44:39 UTC

“Have you ever done something to deliberately hurt someone because you felt they’d caused you pain?” he asked quietly. “And the second you did it, you knew you’d made a horrible mistake, but it was too late to take it all back?”

I think that those two questions probably got through to Chloe more than anything Clark had said to her already. I also think a part of her understands, she did make a deal with Lionel Luthor simply because she felt betrayed by Clark, in that moment what it felt like to be in his position.

Can't wait for more.

iluvaqt February 13 2012, 09:44:41 UTC

I'm relieved that all came out and what motivated him to go through with the act in the first place. If she really understood how redK makes him feel, she'd realize that he loves her. Because right now, all he wants is for Chloe to be okay. And she's been far from okay for a long time. And Clark on redK only cares about himself, cares about how he feels and getting his next rush to stop feeling burdened or guilty, which is what Clark feels all the time. He feels responsible for everything bad that happens around him, especially to those he loves. I hope Chloe weighs everything he said and compares it to what she knows about him, and what she's seen from him in the past.