Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 31

Jun 16, 2012 10:34

Hola, my Peeps! :-)

I know I have a ton of reviews to plough through, but I thought I should post this baby first and then get around to them.

Next Crisis chapter, folks.  Enjoy!

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eternal_moonie June 16 2012, 09:47:22 UTC
*Shows You Lurve*

How can I show you lurve with THIS story?

It's a heartbreaking story of Chlark. *sniffle*

Still one FANTASTIC chapter though, honey!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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babydee1 June 16 2012, 10:00:29 UTC
Once again, you're first off the blocks!!! *huggles*

Thanks for commenting, hun! I know it's a sad one, but I'll do my best to make it all better. It may take a while, but we'll get there! :-)

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summerstar882 June 16 2012, 12:04:56 UTC
Such a great chapter! Love how you delicately handled this important conversation. I can't help but feel sorry for the both of them. Courage and determination shown on both their parts while trying to help and save the other despite the wounds they inflicted upon each other. Classic Chlark in a nutshell.

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babydee1 June 16 2012, 21:23:51 UTC
Thanks, Jen! They've seen each other at their worst now; things can only get better, I think.

Glad you like! :-)

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phantom_queen June 16 2012, 12:33:26 UTC
Oh, nice chapter. At first I thought there was no way for Chlark to get back their friendship but I think you've managed to bring them both to a place so the can find their way back.

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babydee1 June 16 2012, 21:25:44 UTC
It's the hardest Chlark journey I've ever had to write, babes. Thanks for your kind comments! :-)

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easilyenraged June 16 2012, 13:23:35 UTC
Awesome, as always.

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babydee1 June 16 2012, 16:32:54 UTC
Thanks, EE - so glad you like it! :-)

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kitmerlot1213 June 16 2012, 16:45:17 UTC
Good for Chloe for telling Clark about the deal with Lionel and for encouraging him to get help for his anger and resentment. And I also like that Chloe realizes that Clark doesn't need prison to atone for what he's done but continuing to help people and saving lives is the best form of amendment he can do.

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jlvsclrk June 16 2012, 22:03:52 UTC
Aha, so we start to see a way out of this. Clark is determined to do the right thing now, but what is the right thing given all the special circumstances. Chloe is right - Clark being in jail just means a lot of Smallville natives, mostly their class mates, are going to die - that's an inescapable fact. And she's doubly right that Clark needs help with his anger issues - but who can be trusted to help him? Can't wait to see where this goes next!

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