Chlollie Fanfic: Slingshot, Chapter 6

[babydee1]

Hey ya! :)

Last chapter. Still posting from an internet cafe, which is why I'm so dreadfully behind on my replies to your comments. My most sincere apologies - I'm reading every comment, lovin' em and basking in the glory thereof. As soon as I get some browsing service back at home, I'll be right on top of my 'thank-you's!

Here ya go. Again, some

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

That last sentence! The bowling ball comment! The "I went for a walk" excuse! Totally awesome story in total! I always loved reading your stories. I hope you'll get your comp back soon! I will keep twiddlin' me thumbs!

[babydee1]

Aw, Jan, you know I love ya! And I'm so glad you enjoyed this story!

I only have a few mins left here, but I've seen the short summary of 'Some Time Off', and it looks like fun. Can't wait! :)

[eternal_moonie]

Aww thanks hon!

[lilmoochie]

ehhmmm cough cough epilogue...cough cough.. :)

Loved it to pieces! Great job!!!

[babydee1]

Thanks, Sweetie! What can I say - you & Dawn inspire me!

[phoenixnz]

Loved every chapter hon, but dare I ask for a sequel when they're adults and Ollie pulling out the photograph? Please, please, pretty please with chocolate sprinkles?

[babydee1]

You know won't leave y'all hanging. Of course there's gonna be a sequel! :)

It'll have to take a backseat, though; my Chlarky heart is screaming out for attention, so I'm currently halfway through penning a nice, smutty Chlark story. Rrrrowr.

Thanks for all your comments hun - you were with me every step of the way, and I <3 ya! :-D

[carcassi]

Dee, you trouper! I can't believe you just posted an entire story with no home Internet access, congrats!

This was lovely. There's nothing more romantic than a hero who's saved by his one true love, after all. Especially when she's five years old at the time. *Sighs*

Something had happened to him in those three missing hours of his afternoon, something fundamental. Inside he was a changed man. All the rage and pain he’d been living with since his parents’ death seemed to have dissipated, and he was left instead with hope and a sense of purpose. He felt brand new.

The fact that Ollie thought this when he was looking at Lex added even more meaning to that revelation. I couldn't help wishing that little!Lex had a Chloe of his own. *Sighs again*

Yeah, I'm a closet Chlex fan, I admit it. *Blushes*

And his future was bright. Bright green and sunshiny blonde, he guessed with a grin.

And he was so looking forward to it.What a wonderful image to end with! I can just imagine Ollie in his bright green, with his sunshiny blonde by

[babydee1]

"The fact that Ollie thought this when he was looking at Lex added even more meaning to that revelation. I couldn't help wishing that little!Lex had a Chloe of his own. *Sighs again*

Yeah, I'm a closet Chlex fan, I admit it. *Blushes*"

Ah, Chlex...what possibilities it presented. I always say that if the producers had no plans to give us romantic Chlark, they should have given us Chlex. Dumbasses. But I digress...

"This was lovely. There's nothing more romantic than a hero who's saved by his one true love, after all. Especially when she's five years old at the time. *Sighs*"

Sweet, no? :)

"You know, of course, that this screams for a sequel. I'd love to see what happens when big!Ollie meets adult!Chloe. More, please? *Big smile*"

Of course there'll be a sequel! That photograph & green ribbon have some work to do... ;-)

Glad you liked it, Debs! :)