Kaloe Fanfic: Temptation, Chapter 2

Dec 03, 2009 14:04

Ha! Didn't think you'd hear from me again so soon, didja?? :-P

Chapter 2 in the house.

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temptation, chloe, clark, redkclark, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, series:temptingseries, chlark, kal

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christina_kat December 3 2009, 13:56:14 UTC
My head just exploded!
Chloe is the luckiest woman EVER!

//o his hand in her hair was a clear indicator that Kal was in the house.//

I love how blunt Kal is. A sexy move is always from Kal and the romantic moves are from Clark.Great balance.

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babydee1 December 7 2009, 08:17:24 UTC
"My head just exploded!"

Eek! I hope you mean that in a cartoon-type of way, and not literally! :-O

"Chloe is the luckiest woman EVER!"

You're tellin' me! :-P

"I love how blunt Kal is. A sexy move is always from Kal and the romantic moves are from Clark.Great balance."

Thanks! That's exactly what I was trying to portray. Glad you like it, CK!

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sxymami0909 December 3 2009, 14:11:06 UTC
I'm going to come back and read the other story then this one as soon as I have a chance LOL but I just wanted to drop a note and say that the Banner is AMAZING!

-C

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babydee1 December 7 2009, 08:21:46 UTC
Ellashy is a creative genius, and a sweetie to boot. I'm so lucky to have her on my f-list!

And yay, you're reading my stories! *dances jig*

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laurelnola December 3 2009, 14:22:17 UTC
"He pulled her towards him and buried his nose in the valley between her breasts, inhaling deeply. She smiled quietly to herself, knowing he was drawing in the essence of Temptress that she had deliberately sprayed there."

Yes, ladies. If there is any fragrance that drives your man wild, THAT'S a good place to spray it. It's the first place they dive for, all of them. *rolls eyes and smiles*

"She giggled and parted her legs slightly to allow his hand access. He palmed her smooth inner thighs and slid his hand upward, brushing his thumb over the cleft of her sex. He frowned and lifted his gaze to her smiling face.
“What have you done?” he asked curiously."

HA! And that's the second place. I love it.

"Good start to the night, she thought smugly as she snuggled into his embrace. It could only get better from here."

I'll say! That was hot, hot, hot, Dee. *fans self*

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babydee1 December 7 2009, 09:27:37 UTC
"Yes, ladies. If there is any fragrance that drives your man wild, THAT'S a good place to spray it. It's the first place they dive for, all of them. *rolls eyes and smiles*"

Hee! Believe it or not, the first person I got that information from was my high school friend's nan. My friend and I were getting ready to go out, and we'd sprayed perfume on our wrists and neck, when all of a sudden she hobbled along, waved her walking stick and instructed us to spray some on out bosom. Said it never fails to get the boys swarming like bees over honey. And she was right! ;-)

"HA! And that's the second place. I love it."

...especially when there's been some mystery grooming of the personal topiary! :-P

"That was hot, hot, hot, Dee. *fans self*"

Glad you liked it, Dawnie! :-D

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babydee1 December 7 2009, 09:29:13 UTC
Yippee!!!

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ellashy December 3 2009, 20:34:37 UTC
Okay im official addicted, there is nothing better on the planet then Kaloe fics.. i swear.

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babydee1 December 7 2009, 09:30:14 UTC
Especially when they're accompanied by kick-ass banners like the one above! ;-)

Thanks again for everything, honey. You're awesome!

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