Kaloe Fanfic: Temptation, Chapter 3

[babydee1]

I'm a tad annoyed with myself because once again, my four-chapter projection was slightly off the mark. Grr! But I know you all don't mind my lengthy stories, so it's all good!

mari2anne , hope you were wise and got cushy, comfy chairs for that back room! ;-)

Comments

[purple_moon123]

Guh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Are you trying to kill me with super hawt Kaloe???? Because if that's your plan than it's working!!!!

[babydee1]

Oh no, please don't die! LOL!!!

Glad you like it, hon. :-)

[angelbsb]

OMG that was HOT very HOT , when will chapter 4 of this be posted . i love how you write kaloe . and how you write chlark also.

[babydee1]

Thanks, Angel - glad you like it! I'll try and post all the chapters before tomorrow. :-)

[christina_kat]

Can't form words right now...This...was...Um...hot,hot,hot.

[babydee1]

Glad you like, CK!

[psyco23]

1st, did i tell u that im becoming psychic?? when u wrote 4 chapts. i said to myself "add a couple and u might be right".
:)

2nd, you cant just leave it there... where's the rest???

did i mention i love Kaloe??? and your stories??

[babydee1]

"1st, did i tell u that im becoming psychic?? when u wrote 4 chapts. i said to myself "add a couple and u might be right"."

Ha! Looks like you and mari2anne will be great friends. I'll tell her to save you a seat in the betting room!

"2nd, you cant just leave it there... where's the rest???"

I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!

"did i mention i love Kaloe??? and your stories??"

Yes, but feel free to say it as often as you like. I never get tired of hearing it! :-D

Thanks for commenting, hun.

[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOO!!! Totally love this chapter!!!

- The heat generated from the slick friction of his hand made the aroma all the more potent, especially when combined with the lingering fragrance of Temptress and the cinnamon apple scent of the candle. -

Love this line!

[babydee1]

Me too. I threw that in as a little nod to their apple pie tryst in Temptress.

Glad you likee! :-)