Comments | babydee1: Kaloe Fanfic: Temptation, Chapter 4

babydee1

Kaloe Fanfic: Temptation, Chapter 4

Dec 04, 2009 17:22

New chapter! Only one more after this.

Sorry to spam you all, but I thought you'd prefer that to having to wait days for it!

Enjoy. :-)

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temptation, chloe, clark, redkclark, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, series:temptingseries, chlark, kal

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jlvsclrk December 4 2009, 19:38:22 UTC

So much passion and so much fun - the perfect combination.

babydee1 December 8 2009, 09:42:45 UTC

Glad you liked it!

angelbsb December 4 2009, 20:34:46 UTC

that was very hot. loved the sexual banter between chloe and kal and chloe and clark lol. PPMS

babydee1 December 8 2009, 09:44:30 UTC

Thanks, Angel! I'll post the last chapter soon. :-)

jacques21 December 4 2009, 20:58:21 UTC

Hot! Hot! Hot!
Have I told you how much I love how crude Clark is on Red-K. The boy can out dirty talk anyone.
Go Chloe! Taking charge and definitely giving Kal a run for his money.
Can't wait for more.

babydee1 December 8 2009, 09:51:05 UTC

"Hot! Hot! Hot!"

Thank you! Thank you!! Thank you!!!

"Have I told you how much I love how crude Clark is on Red-K. The boy can out dirty talk anyone."

I looooooove Kal's potty mouth. He's so dirty. He tells it like it is, and then some! :-)

"Go Chloe! Taking charge and definitely giving Kal a run for his money."

Yes, that's our Chloe...world domination through the power of cooch. :-P

Glad you liked it, hun!

eternal_moonie December 4 2009, 21:04:37 UTC

you're totally heating up this Chlarker's heart! AWESOME story so far honey! You ROCK!

babydee1 December 8 2009, 09:51:58 UTC

Aw, thank you, Jan! So glad you like. :-D

christina_kat December 4 2009, 22:34:17 UTC

//Clark, on redK - Kal - was taking orders from her, a puny human woman. It was enough to make a girl think she could take over the world.//

That's so true! I would feel the same way. I could never picture Kal taking orders from anyone! It's hot as hell.

//“Just sit on it, will you?” //

WOW! Chloe is really strong. I would sit on it without much of resistance. LOL
There is nothing sexier than hearing Kal saying "fuck me". *shivers*

babydee1 December 8 2009, 09:56:39 UTC

"That's so true! I would feel the same way. I could never picture Kal taking orders from anyone! It's hot as hell."

It really is. I think Nekkid!Chloe is the only thing that can tame him!

"WOW! Chloe is really strong. I would sit on it without much of resistance. LOL"

Hee! You and the rest of the girls in the fandom, CK - and some of the boys too, I'm sure. ;-)

And that icon of yours is prettier than pretty. Lawd, that is one handsome man. *sighs*

So glad you liked it!