Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 2

[babydee1]

Here’s Chapter 2.  It’s pretty much a flashback to what happened that fateful afternoon.

I hope it reads well, because I can’t go over it again.  This is, without doubt, the hardest thing I’ve ever written.

Comments

[lacylaces]

You did an awesome job with Chapter 2. It was very difficult to read, but necessary to your story and you did an excellent job with it. You capture the horribleness of that moment and how alien Clark/Kal was in his violation of Chloe.

Very different and interesting take on that summer. Looking forward to more.

[babydee1]

Thanks for your lovely comments, Lacy. I hope to update today or tommorow. :-)

[summerstar882]

I had one hand covering my mouth and the other scrolling down to read the rest. Damn. You had me riveted. I can only imagine how hard this was for you as a writer having to sit with this material.

Interested to see where you take this

[babydee1]

Thanks, Jen. It was horrible to write, and the only thing keeping me going on this story is how to right that wrong.

Thanks again for your encouragement. :-)

[jacques21]

Man, heart totally in throat right now.
I think it's amazing that Chloe has just been raped but she is still thinking of others, and trying to find ways to explain Clark's behavior.
Cannot wait for more.

[babydee1]

I guess she's known Clark and lived in Smallville long enough to know when something's up. It was very difficult to write, though.

Thanks for your comments. :-)

[chaliebrown363]

OMG Dee! I literally had to take a pause before continuing with the actual rape. I knew it was coming, but I still had to stop for a second. I think you did a great job with it though. That must have been really hard to write.

I really can't wait to read how Clark deals with it, you know, once he's not on the RedK. I want his ass to suffer. I have a bitter taste in my mouth for SVClark right now, so I want all versions of Clark to suffer ;). Thanks for updating so fast!

[babydee1]

"OMG Dee! I literally had to take a pause before continuing with the actual rape. I knew it was coming, but I still had to stop for a second. I think you did a great job with it though. That must have been really hard to write."

It was incredibly difficult, but something that needed to be done.

"I really can't wait to read how Clark deals with it, you know, once he's not on the RedK. I want his ass to suffer. I have a bitter taste in my mouth for SVClark right now, so I want all versions of Clark to suffer ;)."

You and me both, CB. :-)

Thanks for your encouraging comments, I really appreciate it!

[simi24]

I was like summerstar882. Had one had covering my mouth and the other scrolling. That was heart-wrenching. Despite what has happened, she still thought of protecting others and she sensed that something was off with Clark. Will she tell the Kents or will Clark let it slip in his confrontation with Mr. Kent?

[babydee1]

Patience, Rhon, patience! I'm trying to post Chapter 3, but LJ's being mean to me again. Curses! :-(

I'll probably have it up tomorrow evening; it should answer some of your questions. At least the hard part is over, and I can concentrate on making this all better.

Thanks for commenting, babes!