Comments | babydee1: Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 5

babydee1

Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 5

May 27, 2010 00:22

It feels like it's been forever on this one, doesn't it? :-)

Sorry to have kept you all waiting so long. My mystery internet benefactor stopped coming online in the evenings (either that, or he finally protected his network!), so I got off my jacksie and sorted myself out with a mobile broadband browser for my laptop; one of those Pay As You Go ( Read more... )

chloe, crisis, clark, redkclark, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, chlark, kal

Comments 34

eternal_moonie May 26 2010, 23:35:41 UTC

Wow, this was such a well... great chapter. The battle between Mr. Kent and Kal-El was great!

babydee1 May 27 2010, 11:22:37 UTC

Better than the Failsday battle, at any rate! LOL!

Glad you like it, Jan, and thanks for commenting, as always. :-)

phantom_queen May 27 2010, 00:19:41 UTC

Thanks for updating, really enjoy this story looking forward to the big Chlark confrontation.

babydee1 May 27 2010, 13:13:35 UTC

Thanks, phantom queen!
I think there may yet be one more chapter before the big confrontation, but we'll see how the story flows.

Glad you like! :)

latetothpartyhp May 27 2010, 01:28:30 UTC

Now that was a fight!

I did not know I was that blood-thirsty.

babydee1 May 27 2010, 13:18:39 UTC

Hee! You blood-thirsty wench, you! :-P

It was considerably easy to throw in the violence with there two, because they were both super-powered. I can only imagine the look on Lionel's face when he turns up for work! LOL! ;)

Thanks for commenting, hun!

simi24 May 27 2010, 01:28:58 UTC

The battle between Mr. Kent and Kal-El was great. Kinda of nervous about the Chlark confrontation.

babydee1 May 27 2010, 13:25:55 UTC

Only 'kinda'?! I'm totally nervous, and I'm writing the darned thing! LOL! :-D

So glad you like it, Rhonda. :)

psyco23 May 27 2010, 01:39:17 UTC

wow, so tottaly worth the wait. i feel for clark, clearly his dark side, alog with the pain caused by the accident were too strong for his better half to control. i wonder how will he explain things to chloe (like, telling his secret), and how will she react.

babydee1 May 27 2010, 21:49:57 UTC

"wow, so tottaly worth the wait."

I'm glad you think so, William! :-)

"i feel for clark, clearly his dark side, alog with the pain caused by the accident were too strong for his better half to control. i wonder how will he explain things to chloe (like, telling his secret), and how will she react."

I can honestly tell you that I really don't know how the Chlark confrontation will go right now. It's a really nasty situation they have there. :-(

Thanks for your comments!