Comments | babygirladdy: So Hot (4/4)

babygirladdy

So Hot (4/4)

Jan 29, 2013 22:47

Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: fluff, romance, mild angst, mild crack, smut
Disclaimer: If I owned these boys they'd sadly still be as exhausted as they already get.. if not more. >.> ..but could you blame me? XD

Summary:
What happens when Yunho gets jealous and suspects Jaejoong of infidelity with a fan...?

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fic: so hot

Comments 9

lolololololololololololololol mcarol85 January 30 2013, 06:03:38 UTC

/dies laughing/

Hot, and hilarious!!!
Epic plot with suspense, mystery, awesome!!!!
I loved the lines you used..
And the min food! Precious!!! Hahahah!!!

Great tie in with the prompts too!
Write more!!!

You rock!!!

Re: lolololololololololololololol babygirladdy January 30 2013, 06:15:02 UTC

I'm glad you liked keke XD How's everything going?

Thanks for reading hun <3

sharlmawati_yjs February 4 2013, 17:26:32 UTC

Bwahahahahahaha...seriously??!!!that was changmin's journal who cause yunho jealousy?waaaahahaha...Epic!!!!^^..unpredictable!!!at first I was wondering maybe stalker or sasaeng as the culprit...I never thought a "food journal of changmin's " as the culprit...waaahhh..You're Awesome..I love it!
please make some another story,I'm sure gonna love it too...Thankyou for the story and shared it with us..^^

babygirladdy February 4 2013, 22:42:12 UTC

I'm happy you liked it =^.^= Thank you for reading! <3

jj_luver July 2 2013, 14:56:12 UTC

AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH XDDDDDDDDDDDD OHHH GOD SOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!!
Yoochun's parts just made me crack up!! xDDDD
"I'm starting to wonder what you're doing in your room with those late night snacks. I hear noises in the hallway at night.."

"I guess his manbits aren't the only thing he strokes at night,"

xD

aaaaaah thank you so much! That was so fun to read~~~ :D

babygirladdy July 2 2013, 18:10:36 UTC

XD Yay! I'm glad I could entertain you for a bit hehe Thank you for reading! <3

chaebol November 4 2013, 05:12:26 UTC

LOL that was hilarious! I wouldn't be surprise if Changmin had an actual food journal, but the names... it's a wonder if he'll ever give food such names! XD I like how Yunho was connecting two and two together when Changmin was agonizing over his ice cream and Yunho's mind went straight to the gutter lol. But it gave a wonderful reason to have smut and YunJae together. :) Though, there wasn't any explanation on 'who' Jaejoong was seeing but I'll just assume it's a irrelevant fact since this is about Changmin's food journal. XD Anyway, it was a good laugh. You should try writing more humor/crack. :)

babygirladdy November 5 2013, 01:23:14 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! <3 XD This was definitely total and utter crack... it just came to my mind for the prompts in like.. 20 minutes. I didn't even really stop to think through the "who" that Jaejoong was out with or even plot out character profiles (how did I even manage to stay consistent?! O.O /shocked/) - so we can just assume it was a random friend of his / not important to the story. haha Sorry for kinda skimping on that detail XD but I think it's awesome you picked it up!

I hope I can manage more humour keke ahhh, time is not my friend, though. /sigh/ I really liked writing this one, though, so I hope to do more in the future. :)

chaebol November 5 2013, 06:21:20 UTC

Nah, it's better to run on the motivation while you have the chance. You can always edit it afterwards and hey, even readers won't always know there's something missing. XD As long as Yunho believed Jaejoong then 'who' is unnecessary. I was only curious about it. :p

I don't think time is a friend of mine either. I'm a very impatient person and I certainly don't like waiting. lol. There's not really a lot of fics center around just humor/crack (and if they do, they mostly go overboard. But that's just my opinion). I hope you write more too! :)