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When That Thumpa Thumpa Gets Going

Aug 25, 2006 12:39

Title: When That Thumpa Thumpa Gets Going
Author: Greens
Pairing/Characters: Emmett/Ted friendship
Word Count: 370
Rating: PG13-ish (gotta be safe here folks)
Genre: General
Summary: Ted is depressed about youth passing him by. Emmett, tries to cheer him up
Disclaimer: I do not own Queer as Folk. If I did, I would have ended the series a bit differently ( Read more... )

short fics, complete

Comments 3

byatt_lover August 25 2006, 20:08:33 UTC

"Reverse hard to get"- LOL and i love the line "The two of us just kinda get lost in the sea of gorgeous"

goldnote August 25 2006, 23:09:11 UTC

Very interesting, I have to say; Reverse hard to get? Would that work? ^_^ I like it!

jazzygirl918 August 28 2006, 03:23:44 UTC

I've never watched Queer as Folk, but you wrote the fic so that I don't have to pick apart every detail to get to know the characters. Surprisingly enough, in some fics I've read, the writer doesn't know the cannon characters well enough to write about them. You ought to teach them how to do it. I love it how you described the characters mostly by their words, and not their clothing. Dialogue is more important than appearance - it'll help you know the character more intimately. I'm lovin' the humor, too. "Reverse hard to get"...I haven’t laughed harder at a line in a story since God knows when!