Comments | babylon_pride: Falling

babylon_pride

Falling

Jan 20, 2007 22:56

Fandom/Pairing: Lost/CharliexClaire ( Read more... )

Comments 14

subwoofer26 January 23 2007, 02:10:39 UTC

Amazing work, its dark and has haunted me since I read it a few hours ago. Claire is so flawed and Charlie is very interesting too. I love it. Simply stunning work

babylon_pride January 24 2007, 20:49:46 UTC

Thanks. (: This is actually one story that I'm partially proud of of mine.

chicafrom3 January 23 2007, 02:36:41 UTC

Okay, that? Gorgeous. Dark and scary and I'm a little freaked out but it feels real.

&hearts

babylon_pride January 24 2007, 20:50:04 UTC

Really? Thanks so much. That's what I always try for but never get.

eponine119 January 23 2007, 02:53:06 UTC

Don't take this the wrong way, but...hooker Claire is awesome! This was great, her life, and the way you convey her kind of confusion at the end, after she's gotten her drugs again is very well done.

babylon_pride January 24 2007, 20:50:27 UTC

Hooker!Claire is only second favourite to voyeur!Claire for me. Thanks; it more or less wrote itself until the end surprisingly.

arabella_hope January 23 2007, 03:05:36 UTC

I absolutley love this fic - it's painful and the twist at the end - perfect. Also, the detail with the watch sold me, very subtle addition that just worked.

babylon_pride January 24 2007, 20:50:46 UTC

Thank you. I wasn't thinking it would work like that but awesome.

meagan4dominic January 23 2007, 23:28:03 UTC

ZOMG yes! This was awesome. Really good work, you set it up really well & I liked the whole plot of it. Awesomely written as well, I loved it

babylon_pride January 24 2007, 20:50:59 UTC

:D Thanks. Truthfully I usually hate my fics and this is one of the few I don't mind; I'm glad someone else agrees.

meagan4dominic January 25 2007, 05:51:48 UTC

I loved this one, I've been thinking about it for like the whole day, it was such a great read. & you're most welcome!