Fic - Man With a Movie Camera - Chapter Eight (2/2)

[babyrubysoho]

Title: Man With a Movie Camera
Group: Nightmare / Sendai Kamotsu
Pairings: Ruka x Yomi, Ruka x Ni~ya, Hitsugi/Sakito (platonic?), + Sendai
Ratings: PG-13 - NC-17

Chapter Eight, part two

Having arrived at Ruka's home, the drunken double-act put their plan into action...

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[n3uromanc3r]

Ahhh Yomi finally had his way even if it didn't exactly turn out the way he expected/promised poor tipsy Ni~ya-chan! : D
And how proudly Ruka confirmed it really happened and he didn't lose his control over the situation! I know I already said but I really like his character, he's so cool!

I liked Ruki's appearance at the beginning, it was so promising how he gave that wave as if he had a good story about Naito he wanted to share but Ruka's presence cruelly scared him away! His cautious glances were so comical, no wonder he felt the need to bring his girlfriend along... ^^

And the last part with Satty's wandering hand and the blush on his face... so interesting... I can't wait for the next chapter!

[babyrubysoho]

Yeah, poor Ni~ya...but it worked out pretty well for him in the end XD

Haha, I think Ruka's trying really hard to be cool and in control, but basically, underneath he's a total softy ^^
Poor Ruki. How scary to be the lone straight guy in a fic full of men going at it (but Ruka's right - that awesome curvy lil body is just crying out for some male attention!).

The next chapter (interlude chapter) will hopefully be up next week...just gotta find a way to string the bits I've written together.
Thanks for reading and commenting!