a new poem/story, you'd better read it, this may be the best one ever...this time I'm not kidding

[babys1stcoffin]

...but phrenology is so much simpler than introspection 2/24/05And when the dead man finally awoke, he exclaimed

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[beloved_loser]

I like it.

I agree it is one of your best yet... but I think you should label a story, not a peom even though it's in that kind of format.

You're better at stories anyhow.

[babys1stcoffin]

Thank you. Well it's going to be a song, with very little editing, so I still view it as a poem. Besides, have you read The Odyssey by Homer? It's like, a thousand pages long, and it's a poem. So...I don't know for sure what to call this...

[beloved_loser]

stor-em? XP