Perching on a tree branch, morning comes. Not colorful, but brighter than the night. My eyes adjust to see small motion on the ground far below
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“You want another hit to the head, Don?” Andy mockingly retorted. “I’ve been friends with Martin for years, Don,” Andy said, turning to face the man wearing head gauze. “He won’t tell, especially if we keep his mind occupied with things to do.”
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"You want another hit to the head?" Andy retorted. "I've been friends with Martin for years, Don. He won't tell." He turned to his gauzed companion. "Especially if we keep his mind occupied with things to do."
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“You want another hit to the head, Don?” Andy mockingly retorted.
“I’ve been friends with Martin for years, Don,” Andy said, turning to face the man wearing head gauze. “He won’t tell, especially if we keep his mind occupied with things to do.”
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"You want another hit to the head?" Andy retorted. "I've been friends with Martin for years, Don. He won't tell." He turned to his gauzed companion. "Especially if we keep his mind occupied with things to do."
lol Just my two cents. See ya later love!
Janelle
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Andy still wasn’t home to see Don throw on the suit and reconditioned helmet.
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Andy still wasn't home when Don threw on the suit and reconditioned helmet.
What are betas for? :-P Love ya.
Janelle
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