I have been wanting to experiment with script-style wriing for a while, so I freaked out with glee when I saw the format of this! It's just so clever, and beautifully executed! I could imagine it perfectly as an episode. Creepy and mysterious and the characterisations were spot on!
*grins* I could totally see this being an episode; you've done a great job with the screenplay format and I'm really impressed with how well you conveyed their characters in a completely objective narrative voice. The humour was spot-on and the running gags were great (Screw you, Bruce). I'm kind of wondering what the thing with the pendant was, but other than that it was quite enjoyable.
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As for the script thing, you should definitely give it a shot. It's so much fun. :D
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And I loved that how Sam killed the will'o'thewhisp. It's got that real old-school folkways flavor.
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