A terrible plot

Jan 20, 2016 05:45


I've been in RPing the same place for about 8 years now, so I've seen hella tonna plots. Some were fantastic. Some were terrible. This is one of the terrible ones.
A story of pointless travel, random death, and unpunished assassins )

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alondra_del_sol January 21 2016, 07:34:47 UTC
While Light sounds nonsensical and definitely some BRP I would recommend removing the 'r-slur' from your post. I'd consider this your friendly warning before a mod steps in.

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catlin_hunter January 21 2016, 17:48:47 UTC
While it's good that you fixed the slur, you should add an 'ETA' as well, stating that you fixed it. I believe that's also part of the rules here, saying what was changed after the initial posting was done.

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nadrusiel January 21 2016, 09:12:40 UTC
Haha! Oh my god how frustrating and stupid that after ALL THAT he just keeled over and died of old age. It's so bad it's ever so slightly funny in a 'do you laugh or cry?' sort of way! :'D
But poor you, cult leader sounds like he was a nightmare.

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mancalledtrue January 21 2016, 21:20:40 UTC
"Went through hell only for the guy to die of old age" sounds like a Monty Python joke.

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themagiciant000 January 26 2016, 21:17:26 UTC
... What a useless child... "Wah! You don't worship the ground I walk on and agree with everything I say, so I'm gonna get all my buddies to stop playing with you!". I say anyone who would put you on a do not play list over something that petty is no real loss. Pretendy fun time doesn't need such preschool antics.

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