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badapplebettie

Domestic Fluff

Aug 29, 2011 20:42

Title: Keeping House (1/1), inspired by this gem from Benedict.
Series: Sherlock (BBC)
Word count: 550
Category: Friendship/Slash
Rating: PG
Summary: John cleans. Sherlock watches. And provides commentary. And generally annoys John.

verityburns suggested that perhaps I should post my fics here instead of on DeviantArt. So here goes... Maybe this will invite ( Read more... )

sherlock holmes, john watson, sherlock bbc, fic

Comments 23

verityburns August 30 2011, 08:01:56 UTC

Yay for your fic! Lovely story this, perfect use of Mr Cumberbatch's line, which makes me all kinds of happy :D

May I suggest that you unlock the entry and post a link at the sherlockbbc comm, so that others can enjoy it?

xxx

badapplebettie August 30 2011, 22:09:07 UTC

A compliment indeed coming from one of my favorite fic authors. And I submitted it to sherlockbbc. Thanks for the push. :-)

I need to rework my BBC one based on the The Adventure of the Empty House post-Reichenbach reunion scene. I just couldn't resist the urge to write BAMF!John fainting. But the dialogue is off, so it needs some noodling.

verityburns August 31 2011, 14:06:47 UTC

You surprise me, because I think your dialogue is a real strength generally. Story sounds great - I wouldn't say no to a sneak peek if you want a second noodle :)

(And by 'wouldn't say no', clearly I mean 'Can I? CAN I?' English understatement, you see... it's a curse!)

ledasdaughter August 30 2011, 08:50:17 UTC

haha, and again, verity is to blame. We've got quite a list now, don't we :p

it's very lovely. I can imagine Sherlock enjoying watching John scrubbing away at things. He'd probably cause some chaos just to watch John clean it up :p

badapplebettie August 30 2011, 22:09:59 UTC

Thanks! Posted a canon one a bit ago, but you might have already read it.

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badapplebettie August 30 2011, 22:04:58 UTC

Just shared a canon one. Hopefully, you'll like this one, too!

chiiyo August 30 2011, 14:04:19 UTC

Awwwww this is adorable!!! I want to see more! :)

badapplebettie August 30 2011, 22:05:25 UTC

More has been posted! Although it's canon Holmes and Watson this time.

baka_yu August 30 2011, 14:14:49 UTC

Is there anything out there verity isn't the one to blame for? Don't get me wrong, I like it, just curious. *lol*

And I loved this little piece! I'd enjoy John scrubbing as well and wouldn't interupt it. :P
But the game is more important of course!

badapplebettie August 30 2011, 22:05:57 UTC

Thanks! I had fun with it. I just posted a new one, though it's canon Holmes/Watson rather than BBC.

baka_yu August 30 2011, 22:26:04 UTC

I was actually reading the new one when I got your comment, so you win at timing! :D