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May 26, 2009 07:16

Oh gracious, I turn a blind eye for just a sexond and the second post fills up! Darlings, sweetpeas, do please forgive my tardiness. I bring you now our third installment of the fantasticousity, and would indeed love to, ah, beg your pardon in being so late about it.

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART THREE

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anonymous May 27 2009, 04:03:01 UTC

Okay, so sometime around the cultural festival event, after Teddie [SPOILER]announces the Miss Yasogami High pageant will suddenly have a swimsuit contest, Yukiko mutters something along the lines of "That bear needs to be disappeared >:("

SO this got anon thinking. What if the Amagi Inn isn't the family business at all? What if it's just a front, and the Amagis are really... YAKUZA!

AND, what happens when Chie's relationship with Yukiko gets serious enough to let her in on the secret?

I believe in anon's powers! Let's fighting win!

anonymous May 27 2009, 19:04:22 UTC

Hahaha, seconded! :D

Micro!fill anonymous May 27 2009, 20:14:45 UTC

In retrospect, Souji thought numbly, there had been hints. Big ones. Like how Chie dragged Souji over to Yukiko's house to beg her to turn a blind eye to the extortionist gang, because she was sure they'd be straightened out. Or how people called Yukiko's father "boss." Or how Yukiko's shadow had been a gangster in a pink dress. That was a big one, right there. Yet, somehow, Souji kept his blinders on until the words, "That bear needs to be disappeared" came out of Yukiko's mouth ( ... )

Re: Micro!fill anonymous May 27 2009, 20:36:35 UTC

OP loled. Two thumbs up!

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anonymous May 27 2009, 04:21:49 UTC

this meme lacks Dojima/Naoto
So I will request it.
Naoto likes older men, Dojima finds out Naoto's secret. (bonus points if handcuffs are used, or violent!Naoto )

Please for me?

I would like to second this anonymous May 28 2009, 06:30:22 UTC

For Graduation present? :D :D :D

1/6 anonymous May 31 2009, 22:48:19 UTC

"You know."

Shirogane stands in his office, long after office hours, with a hand pressed to his, or rather, her chest. A gesture that would be incomprehensible if he did not know that she's hiding something that doesn't quite fit the image of a detective prince under a jacket and dress shirt obviously picked out from the men's section of some fancy city shop ( ... )

2/6 anonymous May 31 2009, 22:50:07 UTC

When whatever he was about to say fizzles away from his mind, she shakes her head. She apologizes. It's not her place to say such things. But it does not change the fact that she wants him, badly. She asks him to please consider it, as a request from one man to another (with a smile that reeks of irony).

The denial that should be pouring out of him is like a lump in his throat. It has been a long time. He's frustrated, tired, and stressed. And he can't deny that there's a part of him that thinks he should take what's placed in front of him. He knows she has no ulterior motives. If she did, it would be different. It would be better if she did. But while she has been lying to him for a long time, this time everything rings true ( ... )

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discussion thread already?! anonymous May 27 2009, 04:35:50 UTC

I was want to fill prompts for this meme Because I'm Shadow!Kanji's bitch Because there are some cool ideas in here. My problem is when I start trying to write porn...I start laughing, and it never reads right. (It's like 70's porn bad guys) So, how do Anon!Writers out there do it and do it well?

((Well, fuck me, the recaptcha was "do them" ))

Re: discussion thread already?! anonymous May 27 2009, 13:58:44 UTC

"Do them" is good advice.

As for as writing porn, just do what you'd do for any other kind of story. Don't waste words. Eliminate unnecessary adjectives. Keep to the point (the point in this case being porn). The sex doesn't have to be done with IKEA-like descriptions. There's good feelings to be found in the lead-up to sex. And if you're worried what you've written sounds silly, just remember that there's always someone, somewhere, who will find it the most goddamn sexy thing they've ever read. The flip side is also true. So don't sweat it and just write your porn.

Re: discussion thread already?! anonymous May 27 2009, 16:25:26 UTC

This anon has a similar problem when writing the smutz - I need to have a couple of tabs open, one with googledocs or the postbox and a couple of random entertainment things. I write a sentence or two, blush and giggle crazily because I'm embarrassed, and have to go do something else for a few minutes before returning to the porn. I am assured that the smut I've written is pretty damn hot, though, which makes me feel better.

Give yourself a cooldown period on rereading your writes. Leave it for a few hours before you come put it in the meme. Then come back, proofread, and check for awkwardness. If you have a friend who's in this with you, you can ask them for a quick beta and a check as to whether it's silly or if you're just being paranoid.

Alternatively, if you can stand to do it this way, type it all in in one big blob, do a quick check for spelling, split into posts as needed, and submit immediately before you have time to change your mind.

Ganbatte, fellow anon~

Re: discussion thread already?! anonymous May 27 2009, 21:35:17 UTC

I tend to focus primarily on what the characters are feeling and how they are acting (somewhat depending on PoV) than the basic in-and-out stuff. You don't have to mention the bits much (but at the same time, don't be afraid to do it when necessary - and try to use words that suit the characters and situation ( ... )

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anonymous May 27 2009, 04:39:52 UTC

Anon never did finish off Sayoko's s.link in their first playthrough, mostly because she scared the crap out of me and I was convinced that every time I went to the hospital I was one step closer to getting my virgin ass raped hardcore.

...I'm sure you see where this is going!

Nice guy, total homo, I-am-friends-with-all-the-girls-in-town-but-refuse-to-bang-any-of-them!Souji gets molested/raped/non-con'd/all of the above by our friendly neighborhood nurse.

I will totally be that guy everyone hates for bringing Souji/Yosuke back into this on the first page, but if you could be so kind as to throw in some kind of hurt/comfort sort of thing (not necessarily sexual, or even non-platonic) to top it all off, that would be amazing.

anonymous May 27 2009, 16:27:02 UTC

I am mainstream and emit love at you instead of hate. <3

anonymous May 27 2009, 22:48:13 UTC

"I was convinced that every time I went to the hospital I was one step closer to getting my virgin ass raped hardcore."

....But that was the reason I went to the hospital every chance I could.

anonymous June 26 2009, 16:19:33 UTC

you and me both, fellow anon, you and me both.

GOD I WANT THIS LIKE BURNING. SECONDED.

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anonymous May 27 2009, 05:28:04 UTC

Here's something that I've been wanting to see for a while -

Naoto realizes that Kanji has a crush on her, but she just sort of shrugs it off saying, "He's a reliable ally in battle and a good friend, but I'm simply not interested in him - or romantic entanglements of any kind."

But what is our dear detective to do when one day she suddenly finds herself falling for the spikey haired delinquent? Does she freak out? Persistently deny it? Start turning into a puddle of stuttering, blushing goo whenever he's around? And will she admit her feelings to him?

Have at it, anon!

reCaptha: increases prettier (I guess that makes sense)

anonymous May 27 2009, 14:16:16 UTC

On it, anon :)

Not the OP anonymous May 28 2009, 06:32:21 UTC

But I love you anyways

OP loves you too, anon. anonymous May 28 2009, 13:07:38 UTC

I look forward to it. :)

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