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and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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anonymous October 23 2010, 10:39:55 UTC

Anon has a simple request: dirty talk.
Just lots and lots of dirty talk.

Any pairing is fine by me as long as it's m/m.

Phone sex, whispers in bed, words meant to humiliate, words meant to arouse, give me anything. I'm fine with dubcon, noncon, and incest as well, if you decide to go for my guilty pleasure Dojima/Souji.

Just let those boys talk.

anonymous December 3 2010, 04:21:35 UTC

Are you my long lost twin? I think you are.

SECONDING THIS SO HARD.

A Lot of Talk [1/?] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:24:56 UTC

My first idea for a title was Dirty Talk is Hard. For those who write it often, I salute you. 8| Advance warning for dubcon/noncon Dojima/Souji.This time, Souji brought it on himself ( ... )

A Lot of Talk [2/?] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:26:36 UTC

Souji was kneeling by his couch when Dojima walked in, head down and fists on his thighs. Occasionally, that was fine; Dojima was pleased with Souji knowing what he wanted, with this subtle sign of eagerness. Tonight, it didn't have its usual effect. Tonight, it might have been what Dojima wanted - Souji's mouth had been what initially drew his attention to him, the way he sometimes licked the corner the original inspiration for dreams the like Dojima hadn't had in years - but it wasn't for the right reasons, wasn't eagerness or obedience or a desire to please. It was an attempt to get this over with as fast as possible, plain and simple, and Dojima wasn't going to put up with it. Only one person set the pace and it wasn't Souji ( ... )

A Lot of Talk [3/?] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:27:14 UTC

Souji looked at him warily when he pulled away. Dojima wasn't that tender often, didn't like being that way, but sometimes he had to bend to get the reaction he wanted and throwing Souji off-balance was always its own reward ( ... )

A Lot of Talk [4/6] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:28:30 UTC

"Or do you want me to take it further, want me to finally lay you out on your futon, lube you up and fuck you raw? Let me tell you this: I've thought about it, about how easy it'd be to just push you down and turn you over and bury myself in your ass. You probably jerk off at night thinking about it, fingers stuffed up your ass - or do you rub yourself off on the sheets and bite a pillow to keep yourself from making any noise?" If he kept moving his hand, Souji was going to come. All ready there was dampness building up on his slacks and seeping through the thin cotton. "Maybe you're just waiting for me to do it ( ... )

A Lot of Talk [5/6] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:29:04 UTC

Dojima grabbed his hair and smacked his dick against Souji's cheek. "Suck me off ( ... )

A Lot of Talk [6/6] anonymous February 18 2011, 07:30:24 UTC

"Don't lie to me, Souji. Gone from thinking about it actually doing it, have you?" The confidence and wantonness faded from Souji's face. It blanked, and he ignored the cock bobbing an inch away from his mouth. "He must have been impressed the first time you put all that experience to use. Did you do something to fancy and impress him or did you manage to hold back? He probably didn't last long enough for you to enjoy it, but then again you must have been happy just having your mouth full. Let's be honest with each other, Souji: you're a cocksucker. That bulge in your pants doesn't lie. So get back to work ( ... )

Re: A Lot of Talk [6/6] anonymous February 18 2011, 09:20:40 UTC

Inferno of hotness. I don't...my brain broke from the sexy. I'm terrible with leaving those epic comments, but you totally deserve one, writer!anon <3 I-I had notes of all the awesome things I read as I went along, but then the list just got too long and I said fuck it and just read, and then I started like drooling on my keyboard, and I know that's really weird, but I just had to tell you. I'm sure that's awkward to read, but so was this for me. In the most delicious way possible; I felt so wonderfully torn. I've never seen dub-con handled with so much class before. Like woah. No, like woah. WOAH. Dynamic chemistry. Would fav this nine times if I could. But I can't, so I'll just have to settle on one.

Spectacular job~<333

writer!anon anonymous February 18 2011, 18:33:50 UTC

8D

I woke up at 3am, read this comment, and went back to sleep with a huge smile on my face. I can't say that I've ever had someone admit to drooling on their keyboard that like but I'm flattered and also very, very amused by this admission.

Don't worry; I totally consider this an epic comment. ♥♥

Re: A Lot of Talk [6/6] anonymous February 18 2011, 18:44:31 UTC

Anon, I love you and the fact that you commit 100% to these prompts and kinks. This was a great take on dirty talk, and dirtybadwrong Dojima/Souji (which this meme has taught me to love, guiltily); I loved Dojima's twisted justification and the power dynamic shifts and the language itself. I feel so wrong for enjoying this, but it felt so right! Thanks for filling it for us.

writer!anon anonymous February 18 2011, 21:04:00 UTC

I'm so glad to hear this; the power dynamics were fun to play with, and I was inspired by another anon's writing to be more mindful about the words I chose so to hear the language being complimented is awesome, especially since they're so important in this prompt.

You're very welcome. Comments are these are a great thanks. ♪

Re: A Lot of Talk [6/6] anonymous February 19 2011, 12:26:13 UTC

Not gonna lie, anon; this was probably the greatest Dubcon-jima / Souji action I've seen in a while.

Souji's feistiness was just... mhmmm yeah. ♥

writer!anon anonymous February 19 2011, 18:37:05 UTC

Oh wow, thank you! :D

usually Souji's more subdued when I write this pairing so it was an interesting change to write him with a little more attitude.

OP anonymous February 23 2011, 12:04:55 UTC

I am SO sorry for the late reply to this awesome fill. I read it once I saw it, then again a couple of days later, then again and,um, now a fourth time *feels like a total pervert/stalker* but I've a habit of postponing commenting no matter how much I love the fill.

So, once again, really sorry.

Now, first off, I saw in the comments to the second fill to this prompt that you wrote both! That really surprised me. You managed to capture two different voices, two different styles, not just topics (one noncon, one consenting and warm) and I salute you for being able to do that and do it good ( ... )

writer!anon anonymous February 23 2011, 17:07:18 UTC

Hey, don't feel back at all! 8D This is a great thing to wake up to and I know that sometimes it takes a couple of days to feel up to leaving a comment.

I'm pleasantly surprised by you being surprised I wrote both fills. It would have been pretty odd if I'd made Yosuke's POV sound like Dojima's so hearing they came out so distinctly is great. I felt bad about making Dojima such an absolute, complete jerk in this (I always feel a little bad putting him into this kind of position, sorry, Dojima-san 8|) but he fit it so well and played off of this version of Souji so nicely that I couldn't help it. I'll have to write him in a more stable family role to even it out. And this Souji was fun too; I'm such a 'everything turns out more or less okay/let there be fluff' person that I was surprised by how much I liked making these two clash.

I'm overjoyed to hear that you liked this so much, especially since the prompt was something I'm not terribly experienced with. <3 I'm glad, too, that the mention of Yosuke didn't throw everything off. I ( ... )

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