and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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Pretty little thing [1/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:19:11 UTC
December spoilers ahoy! Melon soda liberties maybe taken. Sympathy Crime is a wonderful, wonderful, wonderful kink meme fill and anon prays to the gods of heaven and rainy October mornings her Adachi feeling someone up in the kitchen isn’t a ripoff. It's really not her intention (except for the mention of a pretty mouth, which is more of a tiny, flirty homage. :*)“I’m home ( ... )

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Pretty little thing [2/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:20:18 UTC
A couple of hours later he’s pressed up against the kitchen wall, Adachi’s arms keeping him trapped. This time he kisses back, shame and arousal mingling in his belly to the point where he doesn’t know which is which, but it soothes over the panic that boils beneath. His knees nearly buckle when Adachi shoves a leg between his, his skinny thigh rubbing against Souji’s crotch and making him hard in record time.

A few meters away Dojima is snoring on the couch.

“I can’t help myself,” Adachi says, a quiet mumble in Souji’s ear. “And neither can you, it seems.”

Souji’s all but humping Adachi’s thigh.

He hadn’t even noticed.

When he freezes up, Adachi’s hands slip down to his hips, pulling him closer, urging him to continue. It takes a moment for him to understand-his brain is far too busy trying to take in the sensation of Adachi working his hips for him-but in the end he gives in and starts moving again.

He doesn’t really want to, he doesn’t even want to be there; he doesn’t want Adachi’s tongue tickling the roof of his mouth and ( ... )

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Pretty little thing [3/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:21:09 UTC
The takeout turns out to be beef bowls from Aiya’s, not the rainy day special kind, but still with enough meat for both Nanako and Dojima to push their bowls away and declare themselves full before they’ve barely even reached the rice. Souji quickly does the same, glad for an excuse to leave his dinner without having to explain his lack of appetite ( ... )

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Pretty little thing [4/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:22:18 UTC
It isn’t a question, just a simple statement, but Souji nods anyways. He is. His pants are far too tight and he can even feel his damn pulse in his cock, making it, yeah, ache. “Please, Adachi-san…”

Adachi acts as if he didn’t hear him. “You know what I’d like to do to you right now?”

Souji shakes his head, begging with his hips instead of his mouth now, moving them restlessly, squirming where he sits.

Adachi rises on his knees, leans in so close their noses nearly touch. “Fuck you.” He muffles Souji’s low groan with his lips, waiting until he’s quiet before he pulls back. “Your body is just made for fucking.”

He states it like it’s an obvious truth, but Souji’s had no idea that was the case. Has he been walking around Inaba just begging for it up until now? Is he really that…that lewd? The words flatter and confuse him in equal amounts and he doesn’t know what to say. On top of it he feels panic start to rise inside him. He doesn’t want to get fucked. Not here. Not by Adachi. At least he thinks he doesn’t. “I-I ( ... )

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Pretty little thing [5/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:23:15 UTC
Adachi stills his hand, only working his thumb over a spot that makes Souji jerk, right under the head, one Souji likes to rub and press himself when he masturbates. “I’d let you ride me. On a couch, like this. I’d have you straddle my lap and fuck yourself on my cock.”

Souji whimpers, eyes still locked on Adachi.

“Yeah. I want to see you work your pretty hips hard to get yourself off.” Adachi starts moving again, staring back at Souji while jerking him off, the smirk gone, his mouth slack with arousal now, his voice heated. “You’d be a good boy, wouldn’t you? You’d come all over my belly.”

“Oh god…”

“How about that, Souji-kun… It’s a nice thought, isn’t it? Coming with your ass full of cock.”

It is. It’s such a nice thought Souji comes without warning, with just enough presence to bury his cry in the crook of his arm as he scrunches his eyes shut and spills over Adachi’s hand.

“God, you little…”

And Souji’s almost sure he hears Adachi finish that sentence, hissing ‘bitch’ under his breath, but it doesn’t seem right, no, he ( ... )

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Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:23:59 UTC
Somehow the compliment doesn’t quite stick. Scattered parts of the evening start to come together in Souji’s head and he finds he can’t buy the goofiness anymore; Adachi’s flipped through too many moods too quickly for Souji to believe in any of them. He stays quiet ( ... )

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 21:07:30 UTC
Yesss. Anon who wanted bad touching here, and this was awesome. Your Souji and Adachi are both great; I love how Adachi's words got under his skin and made him worry about giving off signals and the way he couldn't help but go along since everything was so new. And Adachi...creepy without being too obvious and his dirty talk was really, really good. The fact that even afterwards, despite knowing it was all Adachi messing with him, Souji couldn't help but continue to worry and change his behavior...ouch.

Great job, anon.

Please write more of Souji being bad touched and being told he's pretty.

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writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:08:58 UTC
Thank you very, very much. :D It was fun trying to write someone so manipulative; I've never done that before. Scary too, so I'm glad the outcome is appreciated. <3

Glad you liked it.

It's tempting. There's something about Souji being told he's pretty that makes me go hnngh. I'll make a point of including it in all eventual future fills. ;D

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Re: writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:13:02 UTC
Yes, yes, I too go hnngh over that. Why so tempting, Souji? :| Also, haha, I imagine it being kind of awkward to work that into fills where it doesn't fit.

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writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:19:14 UTC
I'll just have to see it as a challenge. It'll be some sort of kink meme 'Where's Waldo'. Find pretty!Souji and you know who the filler is! XD

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 25 2010, 13:21:40 UTC
I can only second the anon above - I enjoyed your writing and depictions of the characters greatly; it was hot, especially the dirty talk. Awyes.

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writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:10:50 UTC
Thank you! &hearts Dirty talk is so much fun to write. 8D
I'm glad you enjoyed it, anon!

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 25 2010, 15:30:28 UTC
those last two words just broke my fucking heart into a million pieces.

love this and love you, anon. fuck.

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 27 2010, 18:12:47 UTC
It feels...strangely good to hear it was heartbreaking. I've never managed something like that before.
Thank you. :D

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 27 2010, 18:13:44 UTC
Argh, writer!anon here, ofc. Forgot to put it in the topic.

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Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 25 2010, 22:13:05 UTC
Loved this. ♥

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