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Coming to you live from a very steamy journal post~

Dec 30, 2008 18:16

Why, hello there, kittens! I'm Kanji, esteemed reporter of all things fabulous and ever so delightfully naughty, and I'm here with a most special update for a fandom just beginning its long, hard... journey into adulthood~!

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Extracurricular Activities [1/?] anonymous September 8 2010, 17:31:32 UTC

I hate coming up with titles.Yosuke admired a lot of things about Souji but if he had to pick one it'd be his hands, no questioned asked. Then again, his smile always made Yosuke grow warm, the way it curved up just a little whenever he came into view, and he couldn't deny that Souji had a nice laugh when he let himself go, and Yosuke'd never had anyone look at him the way Souji did when they were making out, all hazy eyed and wanting ( ... )

Extracurricular Activities [2/?] anonymous September 8 2010, 17:32:34 UTC

They'd been fooling around some - well, a lot, really; Yosuke was beginning to wonder if he was easy, the way he gave himself over to Souji - for a while but they'd never out in public for an official date or even told their friends about their relationship. Souji had mentioned it once and Yosuke had been skittish, reminding him of his notorious reputation in town and how everything he did was watched and the subject of rumor. The topic had been dropped and never come back up. He'd thought about it sometimes when he saw other couples hanging out and he'd meant to address but he'd never thought it was such a big deal to Souji, who was a private guy anyway. What did it matter as long as they knew, right ( ... )

Extracurricular Activities [3/5] anonymous September 8 2010, 17:33:32 UTC

Yosuke had one hand up the back of Souji's skirt, groping his ass. "Do what?"

"Do meHell if that didn't go straight to Yosuke's dick. "Haha, here ( ... )

Extracurricular Activities [4/5] anonymous September 8 2010, 17:34:26 UTC

"Let's do it again ( ... )

Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 8 2010, 17:35:21 UTC

Souji tried to pace himself Yosuke tried as well but saying it was easier than doing it. Souji felt amazing around him and he kept making these noises, these little whines and gasps that would catch in his throat and - "Oh god, Yosuke, harder, please" - drove ruined any kind of pace Yosuke tried to set. One of his hands went under the skirt so that they were both working his cock, movements jerky and hands knocking together and eventually Souji let himself go and just held hard to Yosuke's wrist, thumb pressed against his pulse. Yosuke kissed his temple when he caught sight of Souji's unfocused, hooded eyes, and caught the corner of his mouth, but in the end all he could do was press his lips on the back of his neck again and mouth all the words he didn't have the breath to say.

Shit, so good, I love you, Souji, Souji Souji Souji…Souji twisted back against him and came with a shudder that Yosuke felt in every part of his body, head thrown back onto Yosuke's shoulder and making a noise that should have been illegal. That, combined ( ... )

Re: Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 8 2010, 18:07:34 UTC

HOT AND SWEET AND HOT AND SWEET AND HOT (AND SWEET)

I love their relationship here. They obviously have talked a lot about what they like and don't like, which is awesome (because hey, communications is hot too), but for all that, there's still that trace of inexperience.

Also, I really, really loved how Yosuke prefers Souji as a guy. The bit where he listed off all his gender-give-away body parts was hot and really, really sweet. Also, YAY, date! I wish we could see it, if only because I'm so into their relationship dynamic. AMAZING WORK, ANON!

writer!anon anonymous September 9 2010, 16:36:35 UTC

8D Even with all the stupid errors I forgot to fix? Seriously, self: edit.

Inexperienced!Souji and Inexperienced!Yosuke might be my favorite combination of them, but I figure after a while they'd know something of what the other liked so I tried to combine the two. I'm glad it worked. (And if I can be vain for a moment, I'm really digging the way this turned out.) ♪

Yay! I wondered if that body list part would come off as cheesy but I thought it was important to include it and show that Yosuke likes everything about Souji and that him being a guy doesn't deter Yosuke at all.

If I thought I could write the date well enough, I might attempt it but I think I'll just let it hang for now, haha.

/talks too much

Re: Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 9 2010, 09:32:50 UTC

Just amazing, anon. Pure win. Great dialogue and interaction and UNF SO HOT.

I think I need some alone time now. And then I'll find some way to send you the internets you just won.

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ahaha~

writer!anon anonymous September 9 2010, 17:01:07 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥ I've been waiting to use that blowjob under Souji's skirt idea for weeks.

Oooo, an Internets~ What'll I do with all those tubes? Besides send Yosuke/Souji smut through them.

Re: Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 9 2010, 18:33:20 UTC

Awesome work anon. This was just what I needed to cheer me up, I've been wanting to request some fluffy smut and you've filled that gap in my... um... brain? I loved how in character they both work and their interaction was just really sweet. I could probably gush on for hours but that would only bore you, so I'll just add my praise to the other anons and say the thing I liked the most was that Yosuke actually preferred/loved Souji better as a boy. Makes a refreshing change. Totally bookmarking this one.

writer!anon anonymous September 10 2010, 00:20:55 UTC

I'm so happy this could cheer you up. ♪ Sometimes, you just need something fluffy and dirty to read (and to write too; this was a nice distraction).

A bookmark! One of the highest compliments! :D

Re: Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 9 2010, 20:43:45 UTC

I hope you're happy, writernon. I'm so horny i just don't know what to do.

Because the only thing to make smut sexier is to add sweet little confessions and fluff and CATCH ME UNAWARES. *ack, one of my many only weaknesses!*

So now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go save this to my favorites folder and then hump the nearest humpable inanimate object I can find.

*unashamed anon is unashamed*

writer!anon anonymous September 10 2010, 00:23:27 UTC

Haha, sorry? :x But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Blast those many only weaknesses!

(And another person saving it! Yay!)

Re: Extracurricular Activities [5/5] anonymous September 10 2010, 16:26:26 UTC

Oh man the italics with Yosuke's thoughts about lovin' Souji made me like DAWWW and OMGHAWT. Which is the BEST feeling. :D

And then their hesitance to ask about going on a date while they both want to is so cute. And Souji's bout of insecurity because of Yosuke being oh noes about going on a date was so sad and cute. Ok yeah I love all of it, but I didn't just want to be like that's hawt cause you deserve more praise than that.

Also bookmark'd. <3

writer!anon anonymous September 11 2010, 03:03:38 UTC

Woot for good feelings (and bookmarks 8D)!

I love writing Souji with insecurities and worries, especially if they connect to Yosuke in some way and even more if only Yosuke is the one who sees them. The two of them being hesitant and cute around each other is a huge weakness for me.

Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. It means a lot to me. ♥

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