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Coming to you live from a very steamy journal post~

Dec 30, 2008 18:16

Why, hello there, kittens! I'm Kanji, esteemed reporter of all things fabulous and ever so delightfully naughty, and I'm here with a most special update for a fandom just beginning its long, hard... journey into adulthood~!

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Beary Beautiful: Part One (1/7) anonymous December 16 2009, 23:02:02 UTC

Hey anon! This is finally done and I hope it's to your tastes!“But…Yosukeeeeeeeeeeeeee ( ... )

Beary Beautiful: Part One (2/7) anonymous December 16 2009, 23:03:20 UTC

Teddie gasped in horrow, “Yosuke! How dare you say such a bear-latant lie! Naoto-kun merely borrowed a make up kit for Teddie. I was the one that made me so bear-utiful.” He grinned at Yosuke and threw a sparkle at him, just for added effect. Yosuke groaned and buried his head in his hands.

“Figures.”

“If only you had let Teddie assist in making you pretty too, you might have not come in dead last, Yosuke.”

“I didn’t come in dead last.”

“Sensei said you did.”

“Well Sensei has got his facts wrong ( ... )

Beary Beautiful: Part One (3/7) anonymous December 16 2009, 23:08:11 UTC

"Teddie? Is that you? What’s the matter ( ... )

Beary Beautiful: Part One (4/7) anonymous December 16 2009, 23:09:31 UTC

“Teddie has learnt this from talk-shows - the secret of a good makeover is not to over-do it.” Yosuke grimaced and tried not to think about what he was doing - or rather what he was letting Teddie do, as he felt powder being gently dabbed against his face. It tickled and made him want to sneeze and the scent brought back bad memories of the pageant but hey - it was better than algebra. Anything was ( ... )

Beary Beautiful: Part One (5/5) I fail at counting out chapters... anonymous December 16 2009, 23:12:54 UTC

He felt pleasantly out of it, he thought, as he allowed Teddie to swivel his chair around so he was facing away from the dumb bear granting him access to his hair. He felt his hair being tugged and brushed and pulled into some sort of style that felt completely strange. From somewhere (Yosuke didn’t want to know where) Teddie produced clips and, after twisting a few strands together, fastened the hair behind his ears ( ... )

Re: Part One anonymous December 16 2009, 23:16:47 UTC

Sorry for the counting fail there. It was all worked out on paper. Er, anyway. Part two is nearly all written and will be served later this week. Just need to proof read it again. There will be mild smut, but smut writing isn't really my forte (I'm almost as crap at writing smut as I am at counting chapters. Sigh).

I hope this is okay, Anon!

And on the subject of proof reading,,,, anonymous December 16 2009, 23:28:14 UTC

...I also have failed in proof-reading too. Checking that back I noticed at least three mistakes. Sorry 'bout that. Damn my writing sucks today :/

Re: And on the subject of proof reading,,,, anonymous December 16 2009, 23:36:22 UTC

Oh anon, it's fantastic! :D I love how you managed to put the plot together - a make-up kit from Nanako-chan is just perfect, and going along with anything to get away from homework? I know that feeling. :p I'm really, really excited to see where this goes.

P.S. I missed your question earlier (sorry), but inclusion of Nanako is A-OK! Playing house sounds like it could be a lot of fun... And, of course, S/Y smut of any strength is welcomed.

Re: And on the subject of proof reading,,,, anonymous December 17 2009, 00:14:56 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! (Writer Anon is sparkling!) I just wish I could write smut better coz I like reading it...

I'll admit not a huge Nanako fan (*gasp*) but for the purpose of the story, I think she works kinda well so glad you don't mind me including her. Anyway, we'll see. Just tidying up (and smutting up) the ending a bit more and then I'll post it.

Re: Part One anonymous December 17 2009, 09:20:33 UTC

I can't wait to see this get done Anon! Everything is looking great right now wwww <3

captcha..electronic uglies, what?

Re: Part One anonymous December 17 2009, 22:57:27 UTC

Thank you!

my capcha says pling queal??? WTF is that???

Re: Part One anonymous December 17 2009, 19:03:59 UTC

This is great so far! Looking forward to the rest! XD And I didn't notice ay of the errors so don't worry too much about it, anon.

Re: Part One anonymous December 17 2009, 22:59:08 UTC

Thank you! Errors bug me only when I know I've read the damned thing at least ten times and I'm sure it's all okay and then I post it and miraculously it contains a kazillion mistakes. I'm a bit of a perfectionist...

unfortunately, my writing skills don't always match my ideals!

Beary Beautiful Part Two (1/7) anonymous December 17 2009, 23:07:21 UTC

I hope I've counted right this time. Smut will commence in Part Three. I would have posted it today but the ending just doesn't seem to work right now so I'm rejigging it. Thanks for all your kind comments Anons :) ENJOY It had taken Souji a little longer than he had anticipated but finally he was here. He knocked on the door of Yosuke’s house and stood back politely. Nanako gripped his hand and grinned up at him. “I wonder what Teddie wants to play?” she asked ( ... )

Re: Beary Beautiful Part Two (1/7) anonymous December 17 2009, 23:19:10 UTC

Yosuke glared up at him meeting his eyes for a fleeting moment before grimacing and looking back at his feet. He was curled up into the bottom of the cupboard, sitting under the lowest shelf. That in itself was odd but not what set Souji's pulse racing.It wasn’t even because his best friend was decked out in a fetching black dress or that his hair had been beautifully styled or even that whoever had done the makeover had done fucking wonders because Yosuke looked really hot. The thing that Souji found grabbed his attention so forcefully was the fact that from where he stood he could clearly see Yosuke’s underwear. He was wearing pink panties and for the life of him, Souji just couldn’t peel his eyes away ( ... )

Beary Beautiful Part Two (3/7) anonymous December 17 2009, 23:25:52 UTC

I crapped up on the previous post's title. my bad

“Oh, I see now. Scoring is like when Mama-Hana-san and Papa-Hana-san go to their room for some alone time…” piped up Teddie.

“TEDDIE! We do not need to hear that!” exclaimed Yosuke, as he sprang suddenly from his hiding place and grabbed Teddie in one swift motion. He slapped his hand across Teddie’s mouth and glared at him, “this is one of the things we don’t talk about. EVER. Remember?” he shot an apologetic look at Souji and turned back to Teddie, and added in a furious undertone, “Especially when Nanako is around!”

“Oooooooooo….” Teddie was enlightened. He sparkled unapologetically at Yosuke, “Like those magazines with the hot clotheless chicks that you…”

“SHUT UP! DUMBAA-I mean - bear…” Yosuke clamped his hand tightly over Teddie’s mouth again and shot a second apologetic look at Souji. It was perhaps fortunate that he was so furious with Teddie and his uncontrollable tongue otherwise he would probably have noticed that whilst Nanako was staring at him with wonder writ right ( ... )

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