Ma'am, you've been charged with Ficcing While Intoxicated.

Jan 08, 2005 18:12

Libs RPS is full of lots of really mediocre fic, and the occasional good one, and sometimes there are some that are bad.

Just, you know something? If you include "To Drunk To Write Properly" in your subject header, you should probably not be writing.But I'm glad she did, because this was one of the most unintentionally funny fics I've seen in a ( Read more... )

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cocainepeaches January 9 2005, 00:43:34 UTC
*was hoping to see this here, yaye*

I want to quote my favourite bit, but I can't really - i'd.end.up.copying.the.whole.thing.omfg.

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ipomoea January 10 2005, 04:17:07 UTC
Not only are there hormones in Carl's eyes, they are apparently girly hormones, according to the part immediately following this one. Also, the idea of Pete shushing Carl by saying "Daddy's talking" is too painful to comprehend. Just... no.

I'm almost thinking this girl has to be doing this on purpose. There's just too many of the bad Libs fangirlisms in it.

Although I really like the "My dad's gone so I can write porn yaye" *posts bad porn* "Shit, he's home" post that was the latest installment. Too funny.

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myth_adventure January 9 2005, 01:41:50 UTC
I got almost as big a laugh out of your subject line as I did out of the story ... not that it's used as a verb in the same way, but 'fick' (sound-alike to fic) in German is 'fuck' in English.
*wondering if you know German and did that on purpose*

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ipomoea January 10 2005, 04:19:38 UTC
No, it wasn't on purpose. But I learned something new, imagine that!

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lady_razzle January 9 2005, 10:53:49 UTC
Periods.do.not.replace.spaces.mmkay.

Amen.

*pisses pants and contemplates direct abuse of author*

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eljuno January 10 2005, 01:16:32 UTC
*Flutters lashes over blue eyes.* Hmmm?

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ipomoea January 10 2005, 04:20:39 UTC
As if you didn't already have a harem!

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