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I'm taking you to the Animagi Support Society. - told him Dmbledore. - You're gonna like it there, Harry. *Established by Hermione?*
He is just like Voldemort - short, red-headed and wear glasses!
Tears were threading her face and her eyes were burning with hatered. She determinately shook them off her face.
Harry saw James shagging Sev ( Read more... )
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A couple things:
1: Is the original a block of text like this? Because spaces between the lines would make it easier to read.
2: Are there comments of your own in this? If so, you need to bold them so they stand out.
3: Is this from the Pit?
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As for the actual fic... O_o Good heavens. It's clear the author isn't a native English speaker, but this is... impressive. That's all I can say.
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