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Feb 03, 2010 22:31

The basic plot of this is that Light saves L by taking a bullet from a sniper. Souichirou starts beating L up at the hospital because it’s all L’s fault that his son’s hurt. L is a wuss and doesn’t fight back. Then some stuff happens, and Light’s better after, like, a day. Then L is in the hospital, and… it’s just really messed up. And then there’s ( Read more... )

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duo_aurion February 4 2010, 08:21:50 UTC
"So that's why his name's Light."

I lol'd so hard.

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viil_to February 4 2010, 10:52:59 UTC
Light dropped him and all his worthlessness onto the floor. Shit, I just dropped my worthlessness! Give me a few seconds while I gather it up… ”

BRB dying of laughter.

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merrie_oriensis February 4 2010, 13:06:19 UTC
Hmm. Brain slightly broken. Excellent spork, though. And odd as this may sound, any chance of a link to the rest of the fic?

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retrophilic February 5 2010, 00:28:47 UTC
Either you're a masochist or in it for the "lulz." Here you go, though!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4280695/1/In_The_Line_Of_Duty

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merrie_oriensis February 5 2010, 14:00:45 UTC
Bit of both, to be honest - thanks. I think I pulled some quite interesting faces while reading that. It's like... bits of it had the potential to maybe be semi-decent, but those were overlaid with *so much fail*.

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reckess February 4 2010, 20:36:23 UTC
I don't know this fandom so I don't know about the OOCness, but about halfway through my head started hurting from the logic fail anyway, so let me get to the main point of this comment: your icon is epic.

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retrophilic February 5 2010, 00:27:40 UTC
Why thank you! It's another badfic quote from the same fandom as this.

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sashocirrione February 6 2010, 03:30:06 UTC
If you don't know the fandom, I highly recommend completely avoiding the fanfic while you sit down and immerse yourself in the amazingness that is the Death Note canon.

The anime is at justdubs.net and the manga at onemanga.com and both are almost identical plot-wise.

Avoid the live action movies like the plague until after you've finished either the manga or anime. They make every major plot twist incredibly lame and only improve by having a slightly better ending.

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ze_zana February 5 2010, 04:43:59 UTC
I'm upset and amused at the same time.
I will never understand why people want to turn something called DEATH NOTE into a sappy-crap love story...

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