Dojima is feeling bad about everything Souji has been through in Inaba, and also guilty about his growing attraction to Souji, whom he isn't certain returns his feelings. One night, when they are both very tired and maybe a little buzzed (but not outright drunk), Dojima ends up giving Souji a gentle, sensual blowjob.
I would be happy with any interpretation of how Souji takes it...inexperienced-but-eager Souji, who isn't too sure at first, but ends up loving the experience; manipulative-creeper Souji, who has to restrain himself from pushing Dojima's head down hard and fucking his face, the whole time; nervous-verging-on-scared Souji, who isn't sure he likes it, and ends up regretting it...whatever anon wants.
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anonymous
February 24 2012, 01:45:10 UTC
Just curious, because I love Do-ji, but would this take place at the end of the game? After Nanako's illness, possibly during those months we don't get to play before Souji leaves? I always figured maybe Souji and the team would've told him, or he convinced them to tell him or something. Anyway, if the above additions to your scenario are accurate, or ok, i'd definitely like to give this a shot.
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anonymous
February 24 2012, 04:21:00 UTC
Yes, I was thinking at the end of the game, after all the stress of Nanako's illness, and Souji being left all alone in the house, and everything. Even if Dojima doesn't know everything that's been happening, he's a smart guy...I'm sure he'd figure out that Souji's been through some tough times. I'd love it if you filled this!
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anonymous
February 28 2012, 15:50:49 UTC
OP here! It didn't sound choppy to me! In fact, I'm very much enjoying it so far...I like the way you are building up the relationship between them, and Dojima's thoughts on everything that's happened. I'll definitely be reading eagerly!
Re: Hierophant Revisted (4/?)
anonymous
February 28 2012, 22:33:09 UTC
Our Omelet Lunch was a delicious and mostly quiet meal. Until I opened my mouth to ask for more ketchup, and Souji interrupted with, “How much do you wanna know
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anonymous
February 28 2012, 22:46:34 UTC
It felt like minutes. Could've been, but who the hell was I to keep track of time, busy as I was hugging the first person who was anywhere near my own height in years
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anonymous
March 1 2012, 01:27:25 UTC
OP again! I think this is really going along well, and the first person is working. I love your Dojima voice. He seems conflicted in a lot of small, subtle ways, and you can tell he has a lot on his mind. Can't wait to see how this develops!
Re: Hierophant Revisted (6/?)
anonymous
March 6 2012, 00:34:46 UTC
“So… a T.V. Announcer named Mayumi Yamano, fell in love with the City Council Secretary, Taro Namatame, during her interviews back in the Spring, of potential candidates in the election… but Namatame was married, to a renowned Enka singer, Misuzu Hiiragi. They tried to hide the relationship, but eventually the wife found out, and the whole affair came out into the open.” Souji was looking both at me, and to the ground, obviously striving to lay the ground work for the story, and recall the important facts necessary to do it
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Re: Hierophant Revisted (7/?)
anonymous
March 6 2012, 00:46:16 UTC
“…You’re seriously telling him… like…everything?” Yosuke’s voice was a mixture of worry and partial excitement, which, when I really thought about it, was kind of how he always approached news
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anonymous
March 6 2012, 00:47:22 UTC
And finally, there was Kanji. He seemed to have moved passed his issues quicker than any of the others, probably due in great part to having people who could accept him, which according to Kanji, was what he’d wanted for years. Most of his problems had stemmed just from how people negatively viewed him, and the negative way he then viewed himself, wrestling with being a “Real Man,” who like to sew. But some small part, a part that Kanji had only barely mentioned to me, was the sexuality part
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I would be happy with any interpretation of how Souji takes it...inexperienced-but-eager Souji, who isn't too sure at first, but ends up loving the experience; manipulative-creeper Souji, who has to restrain himself from pushing Dojima's head down hard and fucking his face, the whole time; nervous-verging-on-scared Souji, who isn't sure he likes it, and ends up regretting it...whatever anon wants.
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