Bad, bad bathhouse

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anonymous March 26 2012, 13:10:18 UTC
Adachi comes too soon during sex, or just keeps teasing his partner in a way that makes it seem like he's the only one "having fun".
That infuriates Dojima, who then proceeds to fuck him rough and hard, like he's never done before.
(If you can make it as Adachi doing it on purpose so he can get Dojima's self-restraint out of the way it would be even better! But I'd be cool with anything, really.)

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!! anonymous March 26 2012, 21:15:42 UTC
Y-you have no idea how much this is an amazing prompt.
I'm seconding this pretty damn hard right now.

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Breaking Control [1/??] anonymous March 28 2012, 11:57:49 UTC
How did I manage to get you here? In this dump of an apartment, this room that I have to shell out cash for? Not only that, but here you are, in my kitchen and caging me against my refrigerator. A hunger is in your eyes, a hunger I want to push and pull on. God I was so bored before, and here I thought coming to this shithole in the country would just completely kill me from just how bland and dry it'd be.

This once, I'm happy to wrong.

It was a rough day at work for you today. I had caused you a bit of grief with my "clumsiness" as the chief had chewed us both out for me spilling coffee on the reports to the murder case. Now you were just here for stress relief, and still in a bad mood.

Your hands are shaking. Come on, it isn't like you haven't done this before, sir"Dojima-san... do you want something?" I keep my voice light. It's part of the game ( ... )

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Re: Breaking Control [2/??] anonymous March 28 2012, 11:58:40 UTC
"Hnnng ( ... )

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Breaking Control [3/??] anonymous March 28 2012, 11:59:38 UTC
"Are you enjoying seeing your junior co-worker jerk off?" You hate when I remind you of just how hot this makes you to be doing so taboo. But I love it. I'm going so fast already, I hardly have touched myself ( ... )

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Breaking Control [4/5] anonymous March 28 2012, 12:01:38 UTC
The other hand makes itself known as I feel a violent shove from a finger enter me. I actually buck up, moaning against the hand that pushed my head harder on the cold surface. It was violating me, fast and mercilessly, and I quite honestly loved it. My breath hitched up. It left me quickly and sharp, my asshole now pulsing and throbbing as I let myself squirm from the sudden loss ( ... )

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Breaking Control [5/5] anonymous March 28 2012, 12:02:10 UTC
My outburst seemed to catch you off guard, you actually reached over and gently ran your hands through my hair, but I just turned my head and smirked. "Is that all? Are you spent already... Old ManMy disrespect rewarded me with that monstrous rage displayed across that drunken face as you now slammed into me without care. I was shaking really badly, you had to now hold me up by my hips as my knees completely gave out. Each thrust made my own dick slap against the cabinets, giving me an even more source of pain ( ... )

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Ack anonymous March 28 2012, 19:32:40 UTC
Author!Anon wants to apologize for the spelling and grammar mistakes. Wrote this late at night.

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Re: Ack anonymous March 29 2012, 18:08:57 UTC
oh

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Nevermind that, AuthorAnon!! I-- I'm definitely going to bookmark this, print, hang it on my wall just as it is and--- wait what?!

....A-Anyway, thank you very much for filling. To be honest the way you've handled the prompt was even better than what I had in mind when I made the request, haha! I mean, Adachi as a total masochist and Dojima doing things like using his partner's tie like a leash?! askdjsdkfjkg I CAN'T.

Oh, and I found the way you wrote it in first person perspective as well as Adachi's thoughts on the situation highly amusing!
Not to mention incredibly hot, of course.

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A!A anonymous March 30 2012, 21:31:37 UTC
I..I'm super flattered.

I was just wanting to do something different (geez Kink meme, you're making me do that ALOT), and I was tired as balls. So I went with it and posted it before I could change my mind and yet again scrap a fic I wrote.

N-N-Now I'm pretty happy I didn't.

I'm super happy you enjoyed it. Hearing that just makes me want to keep writing~

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Re: Breaking Control [5/5] anonymous March 30 2012, 00:09:52 UTC
"FUCKING SEXY AS FUCKING HELL".
That sums up my thoughts on this feel pretty much, yes

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A!A anonymous March 30 2012, 21:32:26 UTC
*Dying from the flattering feedback* <3

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