Breaking Point (Part 5)
anonymous
April 19 2012, 05:49:42 UTC
(Reiteration as usual about dark themes present in this,such as a very obvious rape scene.Please note I do sort of bounce between past and present a lot but try to separate them using lines "--------" so please bear with me
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Re: Breaking Point (Part 5)
anonymous
April 25 2012, 16:12:56 UTC
*squishhugs* ;u;❤ shameless anon wanna sankyuu, love u like cabbages & will support ur fic throughout! ;u; shameless anon'll protect u! *SHOT*
was surprised by ur twist on adachi's past; relax, not offended. (snrk was hopin'for a killer orchestrated vengeance scene of the 'kagura' part..how dojima was involved but DON'T LET SHAMELESS ANON AFFECT U write watever u originally intend to pls, gomen! promise don't hold back! love everything u wrote genuinely! ;u;❤ *cheers*)
& shameless anon wants to clarify if "...that's what happened when somebody ended up raping you repeatedly until they got tired." happened or just figurative thought? hope to draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission after depressin' exams's over! sankyuu again! ❤ clingin' onto ur updates like life planks tat cheers shameless anon up. ;u; *shuts up finally*
Re: Breaking Point (Part 5) Writer-Non
anonymous
April 25 2012, 16:59:30 UTC
Thanks for all your support n.n I always add the warning in the chapters now because I don't want another scare like I had before.
There's a lot of stuff I want to add about both Adachi and Dojima's past so you might see some killing yet.
Clarification is that after saying "Let's do something a little different" after the phone call, Adachi did end up having a little non-con time with Dojima and he was sore afterwards.
Feel free to draw mini scenes if you like,but you'll have to link me to them!
I'll try to get some more updates soon after getting my thoughts together,I actually scribble some of this in a notebook e.e;;
Thank you once again,and to everyone who's been following and your support.
Breaking Point (Part 6)
anonymous
May 29 2012, 04:03:17 UTC
(Once again, as I always do with recent entries, would like to warn people of its dark and perhaps disturbing material.Please be advised while reading.Thank you
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Breaking Point (Part 7)
anonymous
May 29 2012, 04:39:44 UTC
(Once again,usual disclaimer of dark themes and elements which may be disturbing such as extremely excessive language and implied rape. Also murder in a sense. Thank you
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Breaking Point (Part 8)
anonymous
May 29 2012, 04:51:38 UTC
(Please be aware that this story contains dark themes and content that may be unsettling. Thank you.This entry might be a bit short since I didn't think I could fit it in part 7
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Re: Breaking Point (Part 8)
anonymous
May 31 2012, 07:52:54 UTC
THANK YOU WRITER-ANON! ❤♥me(づ￣ ³￣)づ( O皿O;; )you❤♥❤ 3 beautiful updates!! ILU!!! kyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! thanks, u cheer me up again! love ur fic! UR AMAZING!! omgahgsasjdfdfllkl *GRAB HUG GLOMP ATTACKS WRITER-ANON!! *shot* .. i rly love how u manage dojima & adachi's flashbacks & presents -- fresh & brilliant-- u pull me into the story. the awkward silence & deep thoughts between em' asdhjkll
;//д//; ♥❤ *smothers u w cabbages & hearts again* gomen weird anon is weird. ;u; i'm not good w words!! haha just a fan of u & haf been lookin' forward to ur update like a some dippy high sch gurl in love trollolol. *hugs u & runs away* (p.s: same shameless anon googled wat non-con meant. left a nose-bled ORZ ♥)
Re: Breaking Point (Part 9)(Writer-Non)
anonymous
August 27 2012, 05:21:25 UTC
I'm trying my best,I've been scribbling down ideas when I can. Works gotten the best of me but I'm definitely doing to finish this! Thank you for the support :3.
Breaking Point (Part 10)
anonymous
August 27 2012, 05:55:12 UTC
(Sorry about the long hiatus,it takes awhile to try to get some good ideas. As usual,please be warned this does have disturbing themes including: rape,murder,death and angst. Please use your discretion.)
The acrid smell of hospital grade disinfectant would hit Dojima's nose like a fist. Slowly he opened his eyes,they felt like they had been glued together,sticky..hard like they had been closed for a long time even though it seemed like minutes to him.
He took in a sharp breath as the bright lights would hit his eyes,his pupils shrinking at the bright lights. His head had a perpetual and dull ringing that started at the base of his skull and echoed its way forwards.His thoughts jumbled as the contents of the wreckage he had left behind.
Where,where am I?A nurse would quietly wander into the room,distracted she didn't seem to notice that he was awake yet.Fiddling with his IV drip,Dojima must have made a noise because she looked over with a start
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Breaking Point (Part 12)
anonymous
December 4 2012, 03:09:50 UTC
(I haven't forgotten about this story,just needed some more inspiration. Writer's block is terrible. Anyways,please be aware this contains Dark themes. Reader discretion is advised
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Breaking Point (Part 13)
anonymous
December 11 2013, 04:20:13 UTC
(Yes,I still am working on this story. I really do apologize for the hiatus and inconsistency with my posts.But I do hope whoever still is following,or is reading this finds it interesting.)
(Please be advised,this fiction has a dark theme to it including scenes of death,murder,rape,and various other things which may be considered unpleasant. Thank you.)
The third time seemed to be the charm,if you used that particular phrase. The last,thin crack that had been etched into Adachi throughout the years,perhaps it had been the turning point,the breaking point that had made him into the monster he was now. The one that protected,and yet,abused the vulnerable young man that he had pushed inside,hidden away from everyone else.
The third time,hadn't been an accident at all. The third time,as he felt himself being shoved against the office wall,being penetrated over and over again,ripped from the inside out,it had been retaliation.
Why can't they just leave me alone? Why can't they just stop it? Why?Why?Why!?The question he had hated so
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shameless anon wanna sankyuu, love u like cabbages & will support ur fic throughout! ;u; shameless anon'll protect u! *SHOT*
was surprised by ur twist on adachi's past; relax, not offended. (snrk was hopin'for a killer orchestrated vengeance scene of the 'kagura' part..how dojima was involved but DON'T LET SHAMELESS ANON AFFECT U write watever u originally intend to pls, gomen! promise don't hold back! love everything u wrote genuinely! ;u;❤ *cheers*)
& shameless anon wants to clarify if "...that's what happened when somebody ended up raping you repeatedly until they got tired." happened or just figurative thought? hope to draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission after depressin' exams's over! sankyuu again! ❤
clingin' onto ur updates like life planks tat cheers shameless anon up. ;u; *shuts up finally*
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I always add the warning in the chapters now because I don't want another scare like I had before.
There's a lot of stuff I want to add about both Adachi and Dojima's past so you might see some killing yet.
Clarification is that after saying "Let's do something a little different" after the phone call, Adachi did end up having a little non-con time with Dojima and he was sore afterwards.
Feel free to draw mini scenes if you like,but you'll have to link me to them!
I'll try to get some more updates soon after getting my thoughts together,I actually scribble some of this in a notebook e.e;;
Thank you once again,and to everyone who's been following and your support.
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;//д//; ♥❤ *smothers u w cabbages & hearts again* gomen weird anon is weird. ;u; i'm not good w words!! haha just a fan of u & haf been lookin' forward to ur update like a some dippy high sch gurl in love trollolol. *hugs u & runs away*
(p.s: same shameless anon googled wat non-con meant. left a nose-bled ORZ ♥)
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The acrid smell of hospital grade disinfectant would hit Dojima's nose like a fist. Slowly he opened his eyes,they felt like they had been glued together,sticky..hard like they had been closed for a long time even though it seemed like minutes to him.
He took in a sharp breath as the bright lights would hit his eyes,his pupils shrinking at the bright lights. His head had a perpetual and dull ringing that started at the base of his skull and echoed its way forwards.His thoughts jumbled as the contents of the wreckage he had left behind.
Where,where am I?A nurse would quietly wander into the room,distracted she didn't seem to notice that he was awake yet.Fiddling with his IV drip,Dojima must have made a noise because she looked over with a start ( ... )
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(Please be advised,this fiction has a dark theme to it including scenes of death,murder,rape,and various other things which may be considered unpleasant. Thank you.)
The third time seemed to be the charm,if you used that particular phrase. The last,thin crack that had been etched into Adachi throughout the years,perhaps it had been the turning point,the breaking point that had made him into the monster he was now. The one that protected,and yet,abused the vulnerable young man that he had pushed inside,hidden away from everyone else.
The third time,hadn't been an accident at all. The third time,as he felt himself being shoved against the office wall,being penetrated over and over again,ripped from the inside out,it had been retaliation.
Why can't they just leave me alone?
Why can't they just stop it?
Why?Why?Why!?The question he had hated so ( ... )
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