"So,You Refuse to Talk Mr.Bond?"
anonymous
December 27 2011, 05:16:58 UTC
Overly specific request I know. Dojima is an agent investigating a rash series of criminal mastermind activities when he ends up being captured by Adachi,said criminal mastermind.
Torture,maybe a little non-con in a chair. I do love roughed up detectives, but no death please.
If anyone's interested internet cookies are available.
Breaking Point (Part 1)
anonymous
December 30 2011, 05:36:48 UTC
(Just an early disclaimer,this probably contains a lot of violence and sexual content which may be seen as "weird". Hope you enjoy none the less. Sorry if I made the characters too OOC
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Breaking Point (Part 2)
anonymous
January 1 2012, 07:03:11 UTC
Dojima hated going to these things. The suits,the tie,the quiet conversations and smiling to strangers like he knew them. Every year the department would send someone to these parties, a mascot to parade around, a photo opportunity for the mayor or whatever political head that was trying to gain votes
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Re: Breaking Point (Part 2)(Writer-non)
anonymous
January 22 2012, 05:02:04 UTC
I apologize if anyone became offended by this fill at all. I didn't wish for it to upset anyone,and in fact tried not to be entirely too violent in any manner.
It was sort of an experiment really getting into "dark themes" and create a love/hate relationship with the captor.
Once again,I truly am sorry if this bothered anyone,and if it need be I am more than happy if the moderator takes it off the board.
Re: Breaking Point (Part 2)(Writer-non)
anonymous
January 22 2012, 10:34:09 UTC
Anon, are you posting this comment in response to the recent thread about disturbing fills? If so, I think you're probably fine; it sounds like the story those anons are talking about was only reposted somewhere within the last day or two, which means it's probably not this one.
For what it's worth, I think you made it clear what your story was about before you began, and are also being faithful to the prompt, so I don't feel you should have to take this fill off the meme even if people did happen to be bothered by it. Non-con and torture are perfectly valid kinks. Heck, they're my kinks! There are all sorts of reasons people might write and read them, and I think it's pretty obvious that 99.9% of the people who write scenarios like this don't endorse them. (In other words, just because you write rape or torture doesn't mean you think it's okay. You might even write it because you don't think it's okay, and the prospect disturbs you so much that it goes all the way around again and becomes intriguing
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Re: Breaking Point (Part 2)(Writer-non)
anonymous
January 22 2012, 13:13:33 UTC
DA
I agree that the fill they were talking about is not this one. OP had said I read a newly-posted fic somewhere (well, newly posted where I read it, not brand new) which means that it was not something they read here but something that had just been reposted somewhere else.
The rest of this comment brings up good points and we probably should discuss how best to avoid situations like OP's from happening in the future.
Re: Breaking Point (Part 2) Re:Re: Writer-non
anonymous
January 22 2012, 16:07:25 UTC
Thanks for your input Anons. I just..I never really want that to happen with anything I write. I guess I'm still paranoid and shy which is why I haven't gotten a name for myself yet.
I'll attempt to finish this eventually when I have time,and I'll still try to keep it pretty tame. I still get all flustered when I write sex scenes lol.
Breaking Point (Part 3)
anonymous
March 26 2012, 06:25:30 UTC
(Sorry about the hiatus, needed to get some inspiration,hope your still following.There's a lot of back and forth, so I hope your able to follow it,I try to divide different time periods with lines. Just to reiterate, this has dark themes associated with it,so readers be advised
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Breaking Point (Part 4)
anonymous
April 2 2012, 07:31:32 UTC
(Just to reiterate to new readers,this has a lot of dark themes which slowly but surely pop up,so please use discretion)
The radio played softly in the background as the windshield wipers clacked softly,cutting through the rain that fell against the window. Dojima had to smile a little bit as he adjusted his rear view mirror,the small figure in the back would catch his gaze,raising her head up to smile back at her father.
"Are you doing okay Nanako?" Chisato would turn her head.
"I'm okay Mom."
Dojima had to chuckle softly,it was a picture perfect scene if the weather didn't agree. His eyes would flicker back to the road,time would seem to slow down as he saw another car suddenly jerk towards them from oncoming lane.
Silence except for the pounding of his own heart as his eyes widened at the light that was closing in on them.
Jesus,what the hell does he think hes doing!?
His fingers would tighten on the steering wheel as he tried to turn away,tried to avoid but the rain slicked tires squealed against the pavement.
Re: Breaking Point (Part 4)
anonymous
April 18 2012, 09:57:27 UTC
OH GODDESS IZANAMIahskjdk please continue!;u; i love tis & YOU so much ; been lookin' for this kind of dark psychological theme to adachiXdojima long time ORZ
u can have all my cabbages, TV & coffee please write more ;u; <3
Breaking Point (Part 5)
anonymous
April 19 2012, 05:49:42 UTC
(Reiteration as usual about dark themes present in this,such as a very obvious rape scene.Please note I do sort of bounce between past and present a lot but try to separate them using lines "--------" so please bear with me
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Re: Breaking Point (Part 5)
anonymous
April 25 2012, 16:12:56 UTC
*squishhugs* ;u;❤ shameless anon wanna sankyuu, love u like cabbages & will support ur fic throughout! ;u; shameless anon'll protect u! *SHOT*
was surprised by ur twist on adachi's past; relax, not offended. (snrk was hopin'for a killer orchestrated vengeance scene of the 'kagura' part..how dojima was involved but DON'T LET SHAMELESS ANON AFFECT U write watever u originally intend to pls, gomen! promise don't hold back! love everything u wrote genuinely! ;u;❤ *cheers*)
& shameless anon wants to clarify if "...that's what happened when somebody ended up raping you repeatedly until they got tired." happened or just figurative thought? hope to draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission after depressin' exams's over! sankyuu again! ❤ clingin' onto ur updates like life planks tat cheers shameless anon up. ;u; *shuts up finally*
Re: Breaking Point (Part 5) Writer-Non
anonymous
April 25 2012, 16:59:30 UTC
Thanks for all your support n.n I always add the warning in the chapters now because I don't want another scare like I had before.
There's a lot of stuff I want to add about both Adachi and Dojima's past so you might see some killing yet.
Clarification is that after saying "Let's do something a little different" after the phone call, Adachi did end up having a little non-con time with Dojima and he was sore afterwards.
Feel free to draw mini scenes if you like,but you'll have to link me to them!
I'll try to get some more updates soon after getting my thoughts together,I actually scribble some of this in a notebook e.e;;
Thank you once again,and to everyone who's been following and your support.
Dojima is an agent investigating a rash series of criminal mastermind activities when he ends up being captured by Adachi,said criminal mastermind.
Torture,maybe a little non-con in a chair. I do love roughed up detectives, but no death please.
If anyone's interested internet cookies are available.
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It was sort of an experiment really getting into "dark themes" and create a love/hate relationship with the captor.
Once again,I truly am sorry if this bothered anyone,and if it need be I am more than happy if the moderator takes it off the board.
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For what it's worth, I think you made it clear what your story was about before you began, and are also being faithful to the prompt, so I don't feel you should have to take this fill off the meme even if people did happen to be bothered by it. Non-con and torture are perfectly valid kinks. Heck, they're my kinks! There are all sorts of reasons people might write and read them, and I think it's pretty obvious that 99.9% of the people who write scenarios like this don't endorse them. (In other words, just because you write rape or torture doesn't mean you think it's okay. You might even write it because you don't think it's okay, and the prospect disturbs you so much that it goes all the way around again and becomes intriguing ( ... )
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I agree that the fill they were talking about is not this one. OP had said I read a newly-posted fic somewhere (well, newly posted where I read it, not brand new) which means that it was not something they read here but something that had just been reposted somewhere else.
The rest of this comment brings up good points and we probably should discuss how best to avoid situations like OP's from happening in the future.
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I'll attempt to finish this eventually when I have time,and I'll still try to keep it pretty tame. I still get all flustered when I write sex scenes lol.
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There are tons of reader!anons including myself, who would LOVE to see this all played out.
And don't be embarrassed about writing it. Noone knows who you are~
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The radio played softly in the background as the windshield wipers clacked softly,cutting through the rain that fell against the window.
Dojima had to smile a little bit as he adjusted his rear view mirror,the small figure in the back would catch his gaze,raising her head up to smile back at her father.
"Are you doing okay Nanako?" Chisato would turn her head.
"I'm okay Mom."
Dojima had to chuckle softly,it was a picture perfect scene if the weather didn't agree. His eyes would flicker back to the road,time would seem to slow down as he saw another car suddenly jerk towards them from oncoming lane.
Silence except for the pounding of his own heart as his eyes widened at the light that was closing in on them.
Jesus,what the hell does he think hes doing!?
His fingers would tighten on the steering wheel as he tried to turn away,tried to avoid but the rain slicked tires squealed against the pavement.
No..."Daddy ( ... )
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u can have all my cabbages, TV & coffee please write more ;u; <3
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shameless anon wanna sankyuu, love u like cabbages & will support ur fic throughout! ;u; shameless anon'll protect u! *SHOT*
was surprised by ur twist on adachi's past; relax, not offended. (snrk was hopin'for a killer orchestrated vengeance scene of the 'kagura' part..how dojima was involved but DON'T LET SHAMELESS ANON AFFECT U write watever u originally intend to pls, gomen! promise don't hold back! love everything u wrote genuinely! ;u;❤ *cheers*)
& shameless anon wants to clarify if "...that's what happened when somebody ended up raping you repeatedly until they got tired." happened or just figurative thought? hope to draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission after depressin' exams's over! sankyuu again! ❤
clingin' onto ur updates like life planks tat cheers shameless anon up. ;u; *shuts up finally*
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I always add the warning in the chapters now because I don't want another scare like I had before.
There's a lot of stuff I want to add about both Adachi and Dojima's past so you might see some killing yet.
Clarification is that after saying "Let's do something a little different" after the phone call, Adachi did end up having a little non-con time with Dojima and he was sore afterwards.
Feel free to draw mini scenes if you like,but you'll have to link me to them!
I'll try to get some more updates soon after getting my thoughts together,I actually scribble some of this in a notebook e.e;;
Thank you once again,and to everyone who's been following and your support.
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