Rend thy Heart [15/??]
anonymous
April 8 2012, 10:34:45 UTC
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Their visits started to lean toward more friendly, more comfortable with each other despite the few after that had both of them on eggshells. The recent visit he was driving back from left him thinking. He had asked Adachi to tell him about his life, about his past. That he wanted to understand him better.
"No, Dojima." A pained expression. "I don't want you to really know...not yet at least..."
His heart had clenched. He already knew. And he felt as though he betrayed Adachi, after all the trust they displayed each other during these visits, how close that had gotten. "...I'll wait until you are ready." He felt so hollow after those words. They were bitter like stale bile in his throat.
"...I would like to know about you though. About your life." Dojima just nodded, not even giving rise to it was odd to have someone request this, not even Chisato had. When they did talk about their lives, it just had come up but never a request. He felt like he owed Adachi, for having heard his life behind his back. It wasn't like he had
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Rend thy Heart [16/??]
anonymous
April 25 2012, 10:35:57 UTC
(( Many apologies for late update... and it not being much. Life just bit me hard for a while.. Hopefully I can get back into swing.))
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Things became hectic at work. Another case had dropped itself on the precedents lap. Another murder. Dojima didn't want to really deal with it. The scene was atrocious, the victim had been cut up and shot much more than what would have been needed...
Even through his irritation and disgust, he thought about a certain ex-cop and his reaction to seeing a dead body... And despite everything he could only think jokingly, without Adachi even being here, he was lightening up a grotesque situation. At least he wouldn't have to deal with this.. Not anymore. It was a bitter thought. One that sunk into his gut, rising up bile. Swallowing hard, choking it down
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Re: Rend thy Heart [17/??]
anonymous
April 25 2012, 15:52:10 UTC
*TIGHTER SQUISHHUGS* ❤
o nomnom nom the same shameless anon loves u like cabbages+fatty tuna now & wishes u well in life. ganbatte! ;u;❤
ur updates always cheer tis shameless anon up! sankyuu! ur part where adachi made dojima "Ghn." made anon laugh from the heart! ;u; such a warm, light moment. & "Here after all this time, that side of him still was there. Adachi: I want you to give me yours."'s mind-blownin', absolute favorite parts. anon hope after depressin' exams draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission. sankyuu again! ❤ *shuts up*
Re: Rend thy Heart [17/??]
anonymous
April 26 2012, 00:36:04 UTC
I've said so before but, writer!anon, you're the best. I'm kind of curious now if you have any other fills on the meme! I'd love to read them. I-if that's okay. Haha.
I hope life isn't kicking you too hard. This fill is definitely worth the wait, so take as much time as you need. And keep up the great work!
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The last line made me chuckle though. Oh Dojima.
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Their visits started to lean toward more friendly, more comfortable with each other despite the few after that had both of them on eggshells. The recent visit he was driving back from left him thinking. He had asked Adachi to tell him about his life, about his past. That he wanted to understand him better.
"No, Dojima." A pained expression. "I don't want you to really know...not yet at least..."
His heart had clenched. He already knew. And he felt as though he betrayed Adachi, after all the trust they displayed each other during these visits, how close that had gotten. "...I'll wait until you are ready." He felt so hollow after those words. They were bitter like stale bile in his throat.
"...I would like to know about you though. About your life." Dojima just nodded, not even giving rise to it was odd to have someone request this, not even Chisato had. When they did talk about their lives, it just had come up but never a request. He felt like he owed Adachi, for having heard his life behind his back. It wasn't like he had ( ... )
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*were there to take my drunk ass home))
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Bleh. Sorry~
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Oh man, please don't eat me though.
And I don't intend on completely dropping it and want to see it to the end, it just might take a while because life happens. OTL
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Things became hectic at work. Another case had dropped itself on the precedents lap. Another murder. Dojima didn't want to really deal with it. The scene was atrocious, the victim had been cut up and shot much more than what would have been needed...
Even through his irritation and disgust, he thought about a certain ex-cop and his reaction to seeing a dead body... And despite everything he could only think jokingly, without Adachi even being here, he was lightening up a grotesque situation. At least he wouldn't have to deal with this.. Not anymore. It was a bitter thought. One that sunk into his gut, rising up bile. Swallowing hard, choking it down ( ... )
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o nomnom nom the same shameless anon loves u like cabbages+fatty tuna now & wishes u well in life. ganbatte! ;u;❤
ur updates always cheer tis shameless anon up! sankyuu!
ur part where adachi made dojima "Ghn." made anon laugh from the heart! ;u; such a warm, light moment.
& "Here after all this time, that side of him still was there. Adachi: I want you to give me yours."'s mind-blownin', absolute favorite parts. anon hope after depressin' exams draw mini scenes from tis w ur permission. sankyuu again! ❤ *shuts up*
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I don't think any writer would ever turn down art.
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I hope life isn't kicking you too hard. This fill is definitely worth the wait, so take as much time as you need. And keep up the great work!
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And it's more than okay! Feel free to also drop me a line too.
http://coffeexcabbage.livejournal.com/
It's my anon-journal. But I posted a few things I wrote. I have alot that is unfinished right now.
B-but yeah now I'm going to just be flustered over here.
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