Dome Child

Mar 23, 2010 10:56

 
Chapter 1 )

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angelic_wings77 March 24 2010, 14:58:58 UTC
Stop saying you don't write well, CAUSE YOU DO!!! Seriously ^__^. I wish I could write awesomeness like that in such a short time!

DooSeob was my original B2ST OTP so YAY! (It's not that I don't like them anymore, I still ADORE them, it's just that I have many more now XD)

Ok, about the story.......

I LOVE IT!!! (hope I didn't scare you XD)The idea is really interesting and I really like where it's going. And the part where Doojoon opens the present was adorable~ TT^TT

All I really want to say is NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!! =D

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cotko March 25 2010, 02:25:34 UTC
I really like this...even though owning humans is wrong...I wish that I owned KiKwang!

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freeconcrit April 7 2010, 02:47:49 UTC
Hi there, I was just perusing this fic and I saw a few errors that are easy to fix, but would definitely improve the overall quality of your writing. I hope you don't mind if I point them out here ( ... )

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gigantic3dream November 25 2010, 05:03:15 UTC
Awwwwww kid doojun is toooo cute: ))))

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bamhyung April 25 2013, 16:29:05 UTC
Please please please!!! Continue this fic i just found it and I love it already!! This story plot is just so good that not continuing it would make me really sad :( *snuggles to you*

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