baekhyun x chanyeol; bandfic ; g ; 4800 words. in which baekhyun is desperately in love and chanyeol gets a girlfriend. warning : broken!baekhyun ( Where are you? I miss you. )
WHERE IS PART 2 WOMAN. I DEMAND PART 2 AAAAAA~ okay seriously the scene where chanyeol told baekhyun he had a girlfriend i think i also died a little. ;~~~~~~~~~~; the secret cheek kisses are so adorableeeee /squeeezeeeees
GIVE ME PART TWO ;_; I NEED A PART TWO ;_; WHERE IS IT.
*ahem* But in all seriousness, this is completely beautiful. Your writing style is very clean and flows very well but it still has some poetic license and I really like it! It's the kind of writing style that I really like to read. I don't know, it just makes a very good story that really enjoyable to read.
When I started reading this story I was waiting for my heart to be broken, but then when it got towards the end and I realized that Chanyeol had feelings for him I literally did a happy dance. I just felt such joy. I guess you got me very emotionally invested into the story, because I wanted to fucking celebrateThe other thing that you did very well was write Baekhyun's despair. I know that sounds weird... but it felt very real. I especially love how you wrote the other members reacting to his depression; that felt very real. And that part with Minseok, oh my heart! He is such a little angel and he would totally do something like that if
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PART TWO. I NEED PART TWO. This started out okay, BUT THEN AS IT WENT ALONG I WAS LIKE OMG THIS I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!! The part where the chinese members got together and the Korean members eavesdropping was funny! And I really like Chanyeol's note, even though Baekkie didn't see it, but oh well. THEY HAVE HOPE NOW YES YES YES PART TWO PLEASEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
Okay it's 12:21am in the morning... my roommate is asleep and I'm cursing everywhere while reading this fic(Curse not in a bad way. I curse every time I read stupid/funny parts and angsty parts hahah)....(Share XD!)
No more explanations needed. This fic is beautiful. It captures me. My heart skips a beat everytime I read this.
Some parts are really funny :)) Especially when Kai and Sehun are evesdropping their chinese hyungs :)))
“You’ve been like that since-“ Jongin says but Tao shuts him up with a kick under the table. Everybody knows Tao is not violent, but when he is, it hurts. LOLOLOLOL Tao XD :))))
“Thanks for waiting for me,” he says and seals his lips with the other pair in front of him. Baekhyun’s lips are dry but it is a heaven of softness. Chanyeol chuckles when he pulls back, butterflies in his stomach and sees the younger boy he admires back in his slumber. I'm screamed when I read thissss, my roommate scolded me and I regret nothing.
“Because I’m in love with someone else.”THE FUUU WHOO :(( PART 2 OKAY? Okayyy ^_^
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okay seriously the scene where chanyeol told baekhyun he had a girlfriend i think i also died a little. ;~~~~~~~~~~;
the secret cheek kisses are so adorableeeee /squeeezeeeees
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GIVE ME PART TWO ;_; I NEED A PART TWO ;_; WHERE IS IT.
*ahem* But in all seriousness, this is completely beautiful. Your writing style is very clean and flows very well but it still has some poetic license and I really like it! It's the kind of writing style that I really like to read. I don't know, it just makes a very good story that really enjoyable to read.
When I started reading this story I was waiting for my heart to be broken, but then when it got towards the end and I realized that Chanyeol had feelings for him I literally did a happy dance. I just felt such joy. I guess you got me very emotionally invested into the story, because I wanted to fucking celebrateThe other thing that you did very well was write Baekhyun's despair. I know that sounds weird... but it felt very real. I especially love how you wrote the other members reacting to his depression; that felt very real. And that part with Minseok, oh my heart! He is such a little angel and he would totally do something like that if ( ... )
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part 2, please! i beg of you ;A;
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my roommate is asleep and I'm cursing everywhere while reading this fic(Curse not in a bad way. I curse every time I read stupid/funny parts and angsty parts hahah)....(Share XD!)
No more explanations needed. This fic is beautiful.
It captures me. My heart skips a beat everytime I read this.
Some parts are really funny :)) Especially when Kai and Sehun are evesdropping their chinese hyungs :)))
“You’ve been like that since-“ Jongin says but Tao shuts him up with a kick under the table. Everybody knows Tao is not violent, but when he is, it hurts.
LOLOLOLOL Tao XD :))))
“Thanks for waiting for me,” he says and seals his lips with the other pair in front of him. Baekhyun’s lips are dry but it is a heaven of softness. Chanyeol chuckles when he pulls back, butterflies in his stomach and sees the younger boy he admires back in his slumber.
I'm screamed when I read thissss, my roommate scolded me and I regret nothing.
“Because I’m in love with someone else.”THE FUUU WHOO :(( PART 2 OKAY? Okayyy ^_^ ( ... )
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