☁ it feels better in the dark

Sep 24, 2014 23:24

i feel closer to your heart
chen/kai
pg-13

+ posted over here for chenpionships

+ listen to this fic mix made by sinisterkids bc it inspired a lot of this fic while i was writing.

pairing: chen/kai

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shanwens September 26 2014, 21:13:36 UTC
i need to tell you that this is my new favorite chenkai (OTP!!!!) fic and one of my favorite fics ever now T u T
i was screaming the day this was posted on chenpionships!!!!!!! because!!!!!!!! perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!
pretty much all my favorite things are in here... jongdae in an oversized hoodie (jongin's hoodie!!!!!!!)... midnight runs to grocery stores... cute lego cities together... jongdae's beauty marks/moles described as stars and constellations...... and you wrote EVERYTHING so beautifully
forgive me for not putting direct quotes in here bc i would put over half of the whole fic in this comment
i think i actually teared up at the end because i was so happy
just thank you so so so so so so so so much for this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are seriously the best ; AAA ;

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baeklights October 15 2014, 22:45:49 UTC
oh haha, i'm so glad you liked this. ^^ i've never written chenkai before so i was really hoping that i got the dynamics right between them. ngl the prompter made this kind of easy bc she(/he?) asked for the cutest things so i just had to flesh out their ideas.

but tl;dr i'm so happy you liked it, and thank you for leaving me this rly sweet comment. :) <3333

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caterplina December 14 2014, 02:10:23 UTC
This fic was so cute, it was so perfect how the gradually fell in love. And when i read the summary, i wasn't expecting canon, but you wrote it really well.
It was beautiful! So detailed and simple at the same time. I loved it :)
Thanks for writing it and sharing it! ^^

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baeklights February 5 2015, 00:26:32 UTC
aww, thank you for your lovely comment. :) i'm glad you liked it. ty for reading and commenting. <3

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baeklights February 5 2015, 00:25:45 UTC
aww, thank you! i'm so glad you liked this fic. ♥ ty for reading and taking the time to comment.

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beautifulunfold February 12 2015, 15:53:32 UTC
Sooo, this is my first fan fiction I've ever read about EXO and I think also the first time I've ever commented on a story (Yes, one of those annoyingly horrible silent readers, sorry!) But I just couldn’t leave this without a comment because it's just so so good (Which is a fact I both love and hate, because how the hell am I going to read other good ones with these standards set?! But thank you ( ... )

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baeklights February 24 2015, 05:22:56 UTC
omg. first, pls don't apologize for your english, this was such a super sweet comment. T__T

to answer your question, no, i wasn't really thinking of sehun having a crush/liking anyone? he's just maybe a little smarter than he seems. XD

thank you so much for your comment. T_T i wish i could leave you a reply as long as your comment, bc this was such a cute one, but all i can say is thank you. ♥

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tsukarerudesu December 14 2018, 22:32:57 UTC
my heart.

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