neverland's will. [2/2]

Jun 21, 2013 22:40

Title: neverland's will.
Pairing: layhan
Genre: friendship/romance
Rating: PG-13
Length: one-shot; ~12,000 words
Summary: While Yixing worries for his future, Luhan laments the past. Because as they dive into a world of memories, it becomes evident that one clings desperately to the broken shards of glass, while all the other can do is try to ( Read more... )

g: romance, f: exo, g: friendship, l: oneshot, g: yaoi, r: pg-13, p: layhan

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candiedwebs July 11 2013, 14:56:55 UTC
CONGRATS ON PLACING IN THE CHALLENGE OMG so proud for you. I haven't had the time to read this yet because school omg ;_; But I swear that I'll read it once everything's stopped being crazy!

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baeksicles July 12 2013, 07:41:23 UTC
asdfghjkl;
thanK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO CONGRATULATE ME, MIN. ;3;

It's completely fine! Life just gets in the way sometimes, you know? I'm still scrambling to get everything organized again after my trip. OTL. Everything's such a mess right now, and my innate laziness surely isn't doing me any good either. *sobs into oblivion*

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candiedwebs July 12 2013, 13:10:10 UTC
It's all right Jess hahahaha it's always nice to receive some recognition for your work, no? I thought you'd appreciate it. :D
Yeah it does omg I have preliminary examinations in 2 weeks OTL and I had school auditions last Saturday, and there's part two of the auditions tomorrow OTL Afterwards, I can eat fried food and let my voice go to the dogs.
It's quite all right. My inner lazy-ass worm is screaming bloody murder at the amount of studying that I have to do right now. ;_;
How was Vancouver though heh heh danggg girl you lucky
I wanna go to Vancouver toooooooooooo

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baeksicles July 12 2013, 22:18:44 UTC
asdfghjkl; Thank you! ;3;

Oh my. It sounds like you have a lot on your plate! I'm sure that you did great at your auditions, and I wish you the best of luck as you prepare for more! (*immediately feels guilty about unhealthy eating habits OTL*)

I should probably get to my studying as well. I'm going for taking six college courses in my third year of high school, and I have no idea how I'm going to get through the year alive. /shot.

i shoulD TAKE YOU THERE SOMETIME. Vancouver is such a lovely place! There's a city not too far away from it called Richmond, and I believe that it's where Kris grew up? Richmond is really cool though! They have this event called the "Richmond Night Market" that's similar to like... a giant carnival, I suppose? It's loads of fun: they have all kinds of food and merchandise. And then there's Bubble Tea shop called "Bubble Queen" anD I SWEAR, THEIR TEA IS SEX IN A CUP. *cries*

I'm going to have to kidnap you from Singapore some time when we're older. PMSL.

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baeksicles July 12 2013, 22:23:38 UTC
Oh my. ;A;

I'm really happy that you liked how this came out. Thank you so much for taking the time to read through this jumble of text; that alone is enough for me. c':

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amillioncranes July 12 2013, 06:18:47 UTC
jfc wufan was mastermind behind this game of reeling in both luhan's and yixing's souls for eternity. //sobs because yixing and luhan have no chance of ever meeting again. and the fact that yixing devotion to his religion kept them from being together in the first place oh my god ㅠㅠ

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baeksicles July 13 2013, 04:06:38 UTC
In a way, Luhan started the game (by reeling in Yixing) while Wufan finished it. And even though I love dear duizhang to bits, I couldn't resist turning him into the bad guy this time around. /shot.

asdfghjkl; With Yixing, it's inner conflict fueled by several different things (his devotion to religion being one of them) that keeps him apart from Luhan. It's a bit difficult to really get inside his head though since this story is written in third person limited. ;3;

I have a short extension up in Yixing's POV, if you want to check it out though. c: Hopefully it'll be able to answer some questions. /shot.

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xingxingisbae January 16 2016, 21:23:35 UTC
I'm crying... FUCKING REALITY, FUCK EVERYTHING, WHY ZHANG YIXING? HOLY CRAP!
Okaaay, this was just... on point (it sounds stupid?) everything fucking kill me, holy crap, I love this but... I don't think I can read a second time 'cause my heart is aching :c
Thank you for writing such an amazing and no, this was epic! Muuuuy épico!

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