Chapter seventeen: Warmth

Nov 30, 2011 18:37

80 words to go!

(oh, and I promise that this steamy love scene won't end with a nasty surprise that replaces the Sexy with Creepy in a flash. Honestly it won't. You trust me, don't you? :D )

Witch Stone, chapter seventeen )

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sunlit_music December 1 2011, 11:04:27 UTC
"May I ask something that is quite private?" Rinabaar said quietly.

"Not sure I have all that much privacy left to hold on to..." Dara mumbled.

*laughs* Dara might not realise it, but her sense of humour is awesome. :)

It was a free Demesne, and she could despoil handsome Majors if she wanted to!

hahaha!

He was strong, he was good to her, and he was right here with her, and that made her feel something that was deeper than lust but far more primal than love.

This line was beautiful. :) Those two are just so right for each other.

Poor Jalon and Aseena...*shudders* Things have been real awful for Kim, too...to lose her friend and have the children threatened. I hope that Jalon and Aseena will be OK, and that Dara will put things right.

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baeraad December 1 2011, 18:39:39 UTC
*laughs* Dara might not realise it, but her sense of humour is awesome. :)

Black, self-depreciating humour? From what I hear about the Australian style of comedy, perhaps she's custom-made to appeal to you... ;)

I hope that Jalon and Aseena will be OK, and that Dara will put things right.

Well, look who's decided that she likes Dara after all, hmm? ;)

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sunlit_music December 5 2011, 10:46:15 UTC
How have you been, Daniel? Long time no post! :) Hey, how's the next chapter coming along? :) Are you struggling with the remaining plotting, or is Real Life getting too busy? Either way, hope that you're enjoying yourself so far.

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baeraad December 5 2011, 11:38:41 UTC
Aw. Sorry. :) I think I sank into a bit of a post-NaNo exhausted fugue there. But chapter eighteen is in the works - look for it sometime tomorrow, at a current guesstimate. :)

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