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Fandom: Hockey || The Devil Lives in Hell's Kitchen - part One

Mar 20, 2010 22:46

Title: The Devil Lives in Hell’s Kitchen - part One
Author: Aleczandra, of the bagelmuffin_luv girls
Fandom: Professional Hockey of the NHL
Characters: Martin Brodeur and Henrik Lundqvist
Genre: Unashamed PWP
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Intense?
Disclaimer: "I've all the demons of Hell in my mind. My only salvation is to vent them on paper!" - Le Marquis de Sade -- ( Read more... )

martin brodeur, hockey, fiction, henrik lundqvist

Comments 4

ravensgurl211 March 21 2010, 18:32:20 UTC

A small error: Martin grinned as he watched him walk back to his teammates, leaning closer to the one called Gomez, probably excusing himself for the night

If this is supposed to be 2008 -- I'm pretty sure, even wasted, Broduer would know Scott Gomez, since they did play together for 7 years. And if this is supposed to be 2006 -- Gomez was still ours the Devils, and it's very unlikely Gomez and Henrik would be talking to each other, even in a bar after a loss.

Otherwise, a very good fic!

bagelmuffin_luv March 21 2010, 18:54:51 UTC

Thanks! Indeed, this is 2008 and yes, you're so right, Martin wouldn't be referring to Scott like that..

Btw, I don't know if it's an error meant or not, but I love how you typed Broduer - the way people pronounce it in English! heh

Thanks a lot for pointing this out! Thanks also for reading and glad you appreciated!

Alecki

a_symphony_in_c March 25 2010, 03:53:34 UTC

Oh my - shameless and playful but unforgiving at the same time. These two have a lot of a potential for that ;)

I had no idea Hnerik had a tattoo o_o

Very interested to see where you go with this :)

bagelmuffin_luv March 26 2010, 02:37:51 UTC

These two have a lot of a potential for that ;)
I agree. If there's something about these two, it's that they have that it them.

The tattoo? There's one picture on which you can see it, maybe two. I'll find it and show you!! XD The question now is though, does Joel have one too?

Very interested to see where you go with this :)
Thank you! But it's not me, it's them! Again tonight, you could feel the rivalry between these two is not only about winning, it's about winning and playing their best game against each other. ;)

Alecki