Comments | bagma: On Elvish crafts and hobbit skills - part III. Also, in spite of appearances, I'm not dead

bagma

On Elvish crafts and hobbit skills - part III. Also, in spite of appearances, I'm not dead

Oct 13, 2010 21:47

I'm sorry it took me so long to finish it, but there was a curse on that third part, I swear! I wasn't happy with the first draft, and I realised my discontentment was mostly caused by the NC-17 scene I insisted on inserting in the middle of what was basically a romantic comedy. It didn't feel right. I've never thought I'd say that about a sex ( Read more... )

frodo/sam, fic

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bagma October 17 2010, 13:39:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad to hear you found it funny. It made me laugh the first time I thought about it, too, but after several months of writing and rewriting the thing I had become completely desensitized to its humor.:)

nimue_8 October 13 2010, 21:29:13 UTC

Bagma! This is adorable!

All your hard, patint work was not in vain. It really had the right tone.

“When I think I spent two weeks looking for it everywhere, and it was right here under my nose in the front room... You can pass on to me stupidest hobbit in the Shire, Sam,”

What Frodo just said about the queer pointer being hidden in the tree could apply to Sam too! Beautiful, good-hearted, reliable Sam was there all along, but Frodo foolishly lost time with other lads!

But now, they found each other! Yeah!!

bagma October 17 2010, 14:02:37 UTC

What Frodo just said about the queer pointer being hidden in the tree could apply to Sam too

I didn't thought of that, but you are right. Many thanks for the great feedback!:)

addie71 October 13 2010, 21:48:08 UTC

What a delightful ending to your story! I love Sam's embarrassment and Frodo's amusement at hearing where the queer pointer was. And, of course, a lovely happy ending! Thank you.

bagma October 17 2010, 14:09:19 UTC

Thank you very much for the lovely comment!

a lovely happy ending

Who knows? Frodo might need the queer pointer again someday... but I doubt it.:)

claudia603 October 13 2010, 23:21:41 UTC

awww...This is very sweet!

bagma October 17 2010, 14:11:49 UTC

Thank you! I started writing it last December, and I thought it'd make a sweet Yule treat.:)

corazone October 14 2010, 01:15:20 UTC

Oh that was a wonderful ending, we too hope you don't need it again Frodo :-)

bagma October 17 2010, 15:23:24 UTC

Thank you!

we too hope you don't need it again Frodo :-)

It would appear that there is a general consensus about it.:)