This was so beautiful. Seriously, one of my favorites that you've written, and that says a lot since all of your fics are amazing. I literally cried reading this. Beautiful, heartwrenching, simple but amazing. Awesome job bb!
"So he watched her tragedy unfold before the rest of the world, and he waited for the breakdown, the tears marking the photos of the tabloids, but they never came."
First off, I adore that Ray song! And this fic was beautiful. Seriously, one of my favorites I've ever read I think. Gah, this line killed me.“I’m sorry,” he whispered, for her broken heart, for the pain that first love brings, and for the thousands and two times he didn’t have the courage to tell her how lovely she is.
I actualy wrote the beginning of this about a month ago when I first bought Ray's CD. But college got the best of me, and thus I present it a tad too late. I've got more half-finished stuff in my hard-drive, and it is my mission to complete (almost) all of them. So stay tuned!
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Oh hell. Tragic and lovely. Beautiful job, hon!
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I actualy wrote the beginning of this about a month ago when I first bought Ray's CD. But college got the best of me, and thus I present it a tad too late. I've got more half-finished stuff in my hard-drive, and it is my mission to complete (almost) all of them. So stay tuned!
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