Title: Until We Bleed

Sep 24, 2009 22:47


Title: Until We Bleed

Rating, W. Count: PG-13, 2981 words

Disclaimer: Not mine. Not yours. And by God, I do hope that what I wrote stays in fiction. “Until We Bleed” is owned by Lykke Li and Mikael Karlsson.

Summary: Now, sitting on a plastic, dully painted blue chair, he tried to forget the feeling of her hand going limp.

A/N: This is unbeta-ed. The ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fic

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lovepollution September 25 2009, 08:54:20 UTC
That was really beautiful, so well written. A lot of death or accident fics can feel over dramatic and unrealistic, but you really managed to make this work. I just loved the flashback scenes too, very intimate and real. Wonderful stuff. :)

P.S. In some shameless self promotion, I'd like to add that withoutdrowning would love to have you and this fic. :)

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bagsandshoes September 26 2009, 03:10:25 UTC
Thank you for the kind words... I really am nervous about broaching any kinds of accident/death subject, just b/c I work in the hospital, and it's hard to really encompass the feelings of anyone involves with mere words.

And I'll definately check out your comm. =D

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linsadair September 25 2009, 13:24:38 UTC
So wonderful I love how you balanced past and present. Oh, thank you for the happy ending. :)

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bagsandshoes September 26 2009, 03:11:22 UTC
THANK YOU for the beta service.

=D

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linsadair September 26 2009, 15:06:40 UTC
*blushes*
The pleasure was ALL mine, I assure you. =)

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beascarpetta September 25 2009, 17:33:46 UTC
Simply breathtaking.I loved every single line.Now that I've found out that she survived I'll go back to the beginning and re-read it,because I was so terrified she would die.Thank you so much for sharing.You are one truly gifted writer.

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bagsandshoes September 26 2009, 03:12:37 UTC
Thank you! And I was *thisclose* to killing her.

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poppypickle September 25 2009, 17:40:12 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous. Will there be more?

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bagsandshoes September 26 2009, 03:13:33 UTC
No, this is a stand alone. Thank you for reading. =D

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bagsandshoes September 26 2009, 03:15:33 UTC
I know what you mean; the hype around them could escalate into something dangerous. And I hope that it wont get worse.

Thank you bb, as always for your kind words.

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