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bahama_breeze77

My First Fic...

Aug 28, 2006 23:36

Title: When Worlds Collide
Author: bahama_breeze77Rating: NC17 ( Read more... )

Comments 43

invisible_dream August 29 2006, 04:06:31 UTC

*hugs orlando*
poor guy. i'm glad he's more comfortable around viggo though.

i'm scared for the furture though *bites nails*

bahama_breeze77 August 29 2006, 23:05:34 UTC

Yeah, the future is still uncertain thats for sure. :)
More to come soon...don't bit those nails off!

alliwantisanelf August 29 2006, 04:09:31 UTC

I just love TJ. I'm glad to know that he is here in your story.

So Orlando's pain is finally coming out where Viggo can help him work through it? Viggo might think he's taking a whole lot of steps back, but eventually they will all be steps forward. Orlando can't keep hiding all these fears inside!

I loved the part about the favorite trees. It's true that trees seem to have personalities of their own, at least in the woods around here. I can just imagine the little tree that Viggo pointed out, and I can see how it might have been overshadowed by the taller and more colorful trees, making it appear insignificant. It makes perfect sense that Orlando would identify with the little tree!

Thank you for another wonderful chapter!

bahama_breeze77 August 29 2006, 23:07:20 UTC

Yeah isn't TJ the best! haha
Yeah, Orlando's pain is coming out but it's just the tip of the iceburg! But I'm so glad you liked the tree part, it was kinda hard to write so I'm glad you got the deeper meaning of it! That's wonderful.

More soon!

readgreekeasy August 29 2006, 05:27:22 UTC

Viggo stared back for a few precious seconds before he couldn’t take it anymore and he gently tipped Orlando’s head up and kissed him.

YAY!!!! Now we just gotta get Viggo to quit being so dense and comfort the poor Orli. I'm so glad you updated. Love this story

bahama_breeze77 August 29 2006, 23:08:32 UTC

I'm glad you love this story, it makes writing it all the more rewarding!! More to come!

mistry89 August 29 2006, 06:41:37 UTC

Am definitely worrried about M & A's plans. Thanks for the update.
Cheers!

bahama_breeze77 August 29 2006, 23:09:13 UTC

Yeah, they are evil little buggers aren't they! More soon.

autumnverse August 29 2006, 06:47:24 UTC

Awwww that was so sad and so beautiful at the same time, I love this story, thank you for the update!

bahama_breeze77 August 29 2006, 23:09:47 UTC

You welcome! Thanks for reading it. More is on the way.