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A Lavish Prison

Mar 30, 2009 22:03

Title: A Lavish Prison
Author: bahama_breeze77Rating: NC17ish ( Read more... )

Comments 41

ash48 April 2 2009, 10:32:45 UTC

Perfect.
xx

bahama_breeze77 April 4 2009, 00:29:21 UTC

Thanks! Glad you like! More coming!!

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bahama_breeze77 April 4 2009, 00:30:52 UTC

Aww! Thanks. I'm glad you like my writing! I hope you like the next chapter also! More coming!

bewitch_you April 4 2009, 22:52:17 UTC

and... it's time to hit Josh hard....... in the head he'll be in coma Jared with Jen and his momma' going to discover the money were there and Jared'd know about it and alll is going to be just fine!!!!!!!! right :-)don't make him suffer so much :-/

RYL

bahama_breeze77 April 5 2009, 01:02:49 UTC

Oh yeah! haha. Thanks for reading, more soon!!

shelgrainger2 April 5 2009, 20:57:11 UTC

Oh poor Jared. He really needs to be free from Josh. I hate both Josh and his greedy mother. They are just evil. Josh just wants control. I hope that Chad will talk to Jensen and tell him more of what is going on. I think jensen already realises that Jared is not happy in the relationship and I hope he can help him get free. Loving this and looking forward to more soon

bahama_breeze77 April 6 2009, 12:54:17 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad ur liking this so much. More will be posted later today!!

anndaydream April 9 2009, 13:20:53 UTC

Wow... this is really powerfull stuff... I love how you managed to make it so bad without being too graphic with the whole violence thing... can't wait for the next chapter...

bahama_breeze77 April 10 2009, 21:45:16 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm happy you like it how it is. Thanks for reading and letting me know ur thoughts!