wow a great chapter,i loved how you wrote this chapter,very intense and interesting.Jared is awake but battling a fever,so not out of the woods yet.You know what the haredest thing about this story is?waiting for a whole week for the updates.Anxiously waiting till next week thanks for this great story im lovin it.
This chapter was so full of emotion...it was wonderful!!! Loved it..especially how his coma/dream evolved with his progress and Jensen's talking to him.
It's really great how you've made this very real...allowing Jared to have the fever, feel the pain...most people would have had him wake up and be totally okay, even after such a horrible wound! You're really a great writer who obviously puts a lot of thought into each chapter!
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This chapter was so full of emotion...it was wonderful!!! Loved it..especially how his coma/dream evolved with his progress and Jensen's talking to him.
It's really great how you've made this very real...allowing Jared to have the fever, feel the pain...most people would have had him wake up and be totally okay, even after such a horrible wound! You're really a great writer who obviously puts a lot of thought into each chapter!
Can't wait for the next one!
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