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baileymoyes

The Vigil: Part Fourteen

Sep 15, 2006 10:27

An LotR a/u rated PG13
These wonderful characters belong to Tolkien.
My thanks to Lady Jean.

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“Lord Elrond.”

“Lady Galadriel,” Rivendell’s ruler inclined his head to she that Elfkind called Queen in their hearts. “It is long since I walked beneath the mallorns in bloom.” ( Read more... )

vigil, legolas, lotr a/u, aragorn/legolas, aragorn, lotr

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krazykitten46 September 15 2006, 17:34:45 UTC

I remember the story indeed though Aragorn's mother's current ailment and Boramir's condition are a little foggy.

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oceansecrets2 September 15 2006, 21:42:15 UTC

Connie, you manage to tear my heart open with the simplest words...

“Yes, of course. How could I have forgotten? You only care because I am Isildur’s Heir.”

I could hear Aragorn's pain resonating in those sentences even before you described Legolas discerning it. I love your warrior version of Arwen - I always felt when reading the book that she would do more than sew banners if not for her overprotective father. And I have a suspicion what form her cleansing ritual is taking (but if anyone has earned it in this tale, it's Boromir!)

Put down that Palantir baileymoyes September 16 2006, 14:06:32 UTC

Once again connected to the hive mind, AV Queen Namarie discerns what I had thought to keep hidden for at least another chapter. It's no use; she's like Galadriel with that Mirror. I'm so glad she's still reading though.

Re: Put down that Palantir oceansecrets2 September 16 2006, 14:30:50 UTC

*kicks self*
*zips lips*
I console myself that with your exquisite story to savor, not many readers will be scanning my comments. No more spoilers, I promise.

Re: Put down that Palantir baileymoyes September 16 2006, 21:08:11 UTC

I love it when you guess. Let's me know I'm on the right track ;)

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baileymoyes September 16 2006, 14:09:54 UTC

Thank you for commenting on Arwen in this story. She's been portrayed in many guises in fanfic, and I'm sure my take on her isn't a new one, but it sure is fun. I'm really enjoying writing her as bossy big sister and proficient warrior, a full equal of her comrades. And I'm afraid you're dead right about power-loving Denethor.

Latest chapter enchantr September 17 2006, 07:06:54 UTC

Good one! I love a fierce Legolas - ooh, such a contrast to his ALMOST (almost being the operative term) too pretty face. The beauty has a sting, indeed! Loved it.

sarkka September 18 2006, 22:38:30 UTC

Lovely to see more of this =)