Price to Pay

Feb 02, 2010 04:06

Title: Price to Pay
Characters: Dean/Castiel pre-slash
Rating: G
Spoilers: For episode 5x13
Summary: Missing scene from 5x13. Yeah, that one. 700-words-ish.

A/N: No doubt everyone is writing a version of this. My fangirl!squee! wanted it to be more fluffy and h/c. What came out of my brain was a lot darker and more full of angst than what my fangirl! ( Read more... )

rating: g, genre: angst, fandom: supernatural, pairings: dean/castiel

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maskedfangirl February 6 2010, 10:16:45 UTC
This is so in character! I could totally see it happening between scenes in the show. Well done!

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baka_writes February 6 2010, 19:36:54 UTC
Thank you kindly. :D

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mckay_ocd February 6 2010, 10:27:02 UTC
AWWWWWWWWW-some :) I love it! In character and beautiful.

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baka_writes February 6 2010, 19:37:20 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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nursethalia February 6 2010, 11:16:19 UTC
Nothing in the universe will convince me that this didn't actually happen!

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baka_writes February 6 2010, 19:37:45 UTC
Hahah- I would tend to agree with you. Thanks for the comment! :D

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soldierly February 6 2010, 12:47:09 UTC
This was so IC and lovely <333 Great job!!

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baka_writes February 6 2010, 19:38:31 UTC
Thank you! And mucho icon!love. I loled. XD

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lola_thursday February 6 2010, 16:11:24 UTC
Oh, oh, wonderful parallel that I didn't consider between Dean's willingness to push Cas here and sacrifice Cas in The End.

I've been craving angsty yet semisweet codas to this past episode. This was just right, dark and real and yet still warming. I absolutely believed this could happen in the moments we didn't see Loved it.

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baka_writes February 6 2010, 19:43:12 UTC
Yaaaay! I'm glad it worked for you! I seriously needed a little something more so I could deal with how cold Dean was towards Cas in this episode, but that little something more had to stay with the tone of the episode. I just couldn't see Dean being all visibly unconcerned with Cas and then having a fluffy behind the scenes moment with him, as much as I would have liked one. :( ANGST ABOUNDS.

I just hope Dean realizes he's being an in denial dick-head. You love that angel, maaaaaan! Just admit it! (Sadly, more and more as I watch this show I get the feeling that Dean/Castiel is an unrequited Castiel loves Dean angst-fest. *tear*) Thanks for the comment!

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