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If We Are Wise

Feb 12, 2010 04:21

Title: If We Are Wise
Characters: Dean/Castiel pre-slash
Rating: PG for a couple swears
Spoilers: For episode 5x14
Summary: Missing scene/episode tag. Takes place immediately after 5x14. Dean's upset. Cas wants to help. 1000-words-ish.

A/N: Once again, I felt compelled to do the episode tag that I'm sure everyone else is writing. *sigh* I should be ( Read more... )

rating: pg, genre: angst, fandom: supernatural, pairings: dean/castiel

Comments 84

hils February 12 2010, 10:25:19 UTC

Holy crap, this is amazing. You've captured their voices perfectly! Nice work!

baka_writes February 12 2010, 15:59:32 UTC

Thank you kindly. :D

roaringmay February 12 2010, 10:58:19 UTC

♥
Beautiful insight.

"I would prefer that you tell me," he says.
I love this moment, it shows a lot of respect and trust towards Dean.

Great fic :)

baka_writes February 12 2010, 16:01:15 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you like it. That line was a last minute addition that almost didn't make it in. :D Thanks for the comment!

soldierly February 12 2010, 12:02:47 UTC

<33333 Just the scene I was hoping for.

baka_writes February 12 2010, 16:01:37 UTC

Hahaha- me too! Glad you enjoyed it. :D Thanks for the comment.

soldierly February 12 2010, 16:03:07 UTC

Welcome! <33

mulder200 February 12 2010, 12:15:04 UTC

Im my head, this is exactly what happened.

I can't help but feel bad for Dean. It's like he has to be truly desperate to finally ask for help. So sad.

baka_writes February 12 2010, 16:02:22 UTC

I know! Silly Dean. You got a big, gay angel to protect you! GO CUDDLE. *slaps* Thanks for the comment! :)

pyjamagurl February 12 2010, 12:23:41 UTC

Aww, this was lovely! A nice way of tying off the episode! I too imagine this was happening as the credits rolled xD

baka_writes February 12 2010, 16:02:49 UTC

Thank you!