Title: A fool in love [Stupid deal]
Pairing: AKame
Genre: romance, angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jin returns after six months spent in the States, What he finds upon his return isn't something he likes, so he decides to make a deal.
A/N: This is for my dear Mari-kun (
mouter ). I promised to write this a long while ago, so I apologize for posting it so late *
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Anyway back to the story... I'm so in love with it. When I told you the idea... I didn't thought that you do something like this. It's so wonderful story. And I'd like that drama Queen!Jin and I also love the moment in the sofa with both of them. Well I think I love just all story. It was simply great Mara-chan.
Thank you dear! *hugs*
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I'm relieved glad to hear that <3
I know there might be a bit too much drama in the story, but... Idk why I thought it would be ok if it was *shot*
*HUG* We love you, kid n_n
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only my fluffy stories end up being smutty most of the time lol *gets shot*
wanna know secret? I'm an angst whore, too XDD Somehow it's easier to get all gloomy and write angst than think about fluff..... O.o that's why I'm always so scared while posting something what is supossed to be fluffy >.
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Overall I enjoyed reading it<3<3
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anou.... the fic is so Mari-like lol << okay, THAT sounds kind of bad >.<
beside of that, the whole Kame avoiding Jin situation and Jin trying to avoid Kame back for a while as a sort of a payback or something lol sounds believable, actually.... and oh.my.......... *hugs Kame* things must have been pretty tough without Jin >.< but Jin is caring and *gasps* only Jin could be crazy enough to make such a deal -- and stand it to the very bloody end O.o that part was a part of the request, right? because if you just got up one day with an urgent need to write about Jin stabbing himself, I'm going to be seriously worried about you!! XDD
"Jin looked at him and he was met by the cutest scene he saw up until that moment: the sleepy expression on Kazuya's face softened his tired features, and his fluffy hair topped it with utter cuteness." YES!!! *runs around like crazy* *_______* I'm sooo going to bed with this image on my mind! *snuggles* and and and how they keep bickering ( ... )
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Um... I'm afraid that... that part wasn't in the request *hides* I swear I had no idea at that moment what Jin's part of the deal would be *shot* So... no need to be worried *grin* I did worse things to him, tbh *hides*
Don't we love drama queen!Akanishi? XD *shot* He pretty much did it on purpose, but only to scare Kame *hides* well hey... he needed to teach him a lesson somehow, right? XD if Kame just wouldn't understand his concern
I was kind of expecting a long comment from you XD and at this: because if you just got up one day with an urgent need to write about Jin stabbing himself, I'm going to be seriously worried about you!! XDD I just started LOLing XD
All in all... I'm happy you liked it <3
*HUG*
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For some reason I didn't find it too ansgty probably I'm the only one, I know I mean, the whole idea of Kazu starving to death because, oh yeah big point to this one, he thought he was fat *rolls her eyes* *coughs* I can understand him but at the same time I don't understand how he jumped to that conclusion. Most likely he felt the preassure of feeling up Jin's spot on KAT-TUN and felt like losing control of everything and only did this to gain some "control" in his life.... Maybe... Idk... I kind of liked it the whole idea *hides*
I loved, however, how sweet and caring Jin was shocking, I know and all the things he was doing to keep Kazuya healthy, to the point of cutting himself. I mean, even when it was just a superficial wound, most people wouldn't be able to get that far as to show his own concern to other people, right? Though I must admit I cracked up at the "I can die in peace now" thing...Oh, sweet ( ... )
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Well, it wasn't supposed to be that angsty, I guess... what bugs me is that I couldn't exactly deal with the anorexia thing. I mean... I didn't know how to emphasize it -.- But other than that... Idk (I still hope the message I intended to give was received XD)
Idk why I make him either suffer a LOT or make him the sweetest guy around *shot*
That line was supposed to be funny XDand it seemed to work *grin* Seeing that Jin planned it, he was (in a way) making fun of Kame *hides*
*grin* that's one of my favorite lines too *shot* He kind of knew Kame would take it on him later on, so at that moment (while Kame was still in shock) he wanted to take a bit of advantage of the situation XD
What are you doing awake at that hour? O.o
Thank you honey <3
*HUG*
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E amandoua, iti zic eu ;) *shot*
Poi Jin stii ca e cute cand vrea <3
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Jinjin is always cute <3
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