Comments | bakerlooline: Second Chance Idol

bakerlooline

Second Chance Idol - Week 1

Feb 16, 2012 19:08

( let me tell you a story about a girl named Gwen... )

Comments 25

mymisguided February 17 2012, 00:21:51 UTC

Aw, I really liked this. =) This line stood out to me especially: "Really, getting into the competition was much more trying than the competition itself!"

Good work!

bakerlooline February 17 2012, 03:27:58 UTC

I'm glad you liked, and that something stuck out for you. Thanks so much for reading :)

yuniebaby February 17 2012, 05:47:03 UTC

Such a great take on the topic. Seems like a good beginning for something that could be much longer. ^_^

bakerlooline February 17 2012, 16:36:08 UTC

thanks! I was a little afraid it was too out there, so I'm glad you liked it.

I'd like to flesh out this story to something larger, definitely. so we'll see!

minnesattva February 18 2012, 14:22:37 UTC

No I agree; this is a great perspective. So many people think that's missing....

solstice_singer February 17 2012, 12:32:38 UTC

I love the spunk of your heroine. I hope Gwen showed them exactly what she's made of.

bakerlooline February 17 2012, 16:36:26 UTC

me too! I have a feeling she might ;)

medleymisty February 17 2012, 15:37:22 UTC

I like this. Go Gwen go!

Reminds me of Eowyn a bit, who was definitely my favorite character in LOTR.

bakerlooline February 17 2012, 16:37:06 UTC

I have a feeling characters like Eowyn (who I also love) are inadvertent inspirations for Gwen. I'm glad you like her!

oxymoron67 February 17 2012, 16:52:13 UTC

Like others have said, I feel that this could be the start of something much bigger.

I liked it. There was a nice turnof phrase here.

bakerlooline February 17 2012, 17:37:06 UTC

I think there are a lot of Gwen stories floating around in my head. I'm hoping SCI will allow me to explore them.

glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!