poem

[balladinplainl]

hey, i wrote a poem in creative writing, kind of one last true work of art i'll do in that class

Comments

[bendbeforeigo]

Comment love. I love this poem. Big ups, mad props

[retrogradeissue]

this should be published. seriously paul, you've grown alot.

[anonymous]

wowowowowowowow wow your so artsy.

you try way too hard dude.

[balladinplainl]

haha let's see something you've done.

About the masterpiece

[introspection63]

Paul,

Your poem is a mainstream gem.
However, as it is non-autistic in format, I cannot completely relate.

Unchanged, this could make you famous!

[introspection63]

um... That was not positive enough, this really is excellent writing. Don't take this the wrong way, but I especially enjoy it when you are extremely wise or insightful one minute, and then you get Tourette's the next.