Persephone

[balloonhat]

Comments

[belluminabyssus]

I love this, and it's so definitely your style. The first sentence is so vivid and compelling I'm almost jealous. I'm not necessarily sure that this is a remix of the original entry (it seems to start off from the place where openedlocket's story ended), but regardless, you did great justice to the Persephone myth and as usual, it was gorgeously written. :)

[keppiehed]

In the style of a true drabble, every words earns its way. This was flawlessly executed.